living a part

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Here a new story of what I felt about long distance realationship but the end is so much different. Let's hope it goes well for Joon and Jinki. :)

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Djatasma
#1
Chapter 1: This was nice. You could really extend it out some more if you wanted. Who knows it may turn into a chaptered story.
Dana_1004 #2
Chapter 1: This one shot has so much potential and i love it ^^
But please get a beta reader because there are so many grammar errors >.<
Also males can't call each other ''oppa'' ^^
Fix these things and it will be much better FIGHTING with more upcoming stories ^^