Hyunarella

Description

A story based on Cinderella....sort of.

The difference: There's three stepsisters, One of them isn't even evil, Two Fairy Godmothers, A  nice cat, No mice, no pumpkin involved... and you get it it's not 100% based off the story. Most of the stuff I made up and most of the characters are not human, because I wrote this just for Halloween. Purely made to entertain.

Foreword

Once upon a time, in the city of Seoul, there lived a tall, young, eccentric vampire girl and her name was Hyunarella. She had a father that treated her well, and coped with her eccentric behavior. One day, he went out to work, and when he came back, he announced that he’s going to get married in a couple of weeks. Hyunarella didn’t even know much about this woman that he met, only thatshe is a beautiful witch, named Meirin and that she has three daughters, Kimmi, Ana and Yujin,the youngest of out them.All three of them were just as beautiful as their mother, however Yujin is considered an oddball, as she owns a chicken. Hyunarella didn’t like the fact that he got married to her so quickly, but she was happy for her father. He made it up to her by buying her a pet cat. Since Hyunarella wasn’t great with names, she called her Kitty, like every cat she sees.

 

Hyunarella didn’t enjoy the company of Meirin or Kimmi and Ana too much. Her mother was abusive towards Hyunarella and Kimmi and Ana bully her, but she managed to find the fun in it by annoying and provoking them. However she found that the youngest, to be very nice and she enjoyed her company. Hyunarella’s stepmother didn’t like her too much either. Meirin found her incompetent, rude, and too odd, and Kimmi and Ana found her to be really annoying.

 

One day, there was a news broadcast on TV, and it reported that an accident occurred. Hyunarella wassoon dismayed, upon suddenly knowing that it was her father that had died in the accident. Now her abusive stepmother owns everything, and she forced Hyunarella to live in the attic, but it didn’t bother her much, she doesn’t mind the draft or anything.

 

Every day and night, her stepmother and her eldest daughters order her around to do everything around the house. She decided to comply for a couple of weeks and then she does the chores whenever she felt like it. The more Meirin tried to get Hyunarella to work, the more she rebelled. Sonow, Hyunarella just continues to wait for something to happen interesting in her life; like hoping to meet a boy that in her mind seems perfect enough. This is a story about Hyunarella and how she meets her perfect boy.

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saengiee16 #1
Chapter 1: AWESOME STORY !!!!
hydeist3 #2
(Part 2) Gahh~~ The dance part between Saengie and Hyunarella was like <3 Heart was really beating for some reason. xD And when he took off his mask and was about to take off her's...~ *dreamy sigh* So romantic! I love how you changed the "left a shoe" thing to the rose hairclip... Very unique! ^^<br />
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It's kinda funny how Saengie asked to use their bathroom. LOL.<br />
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Gah! How could Meirin set the freaking house on fire??! ><<br />
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“Cheong Su! We’re full time fairy godmothers now!” Hyun Bi cut in.<br />
“Geuraeyo!?” Omona yay! Now our spells don’t last till midnight!” Cheong Su cheered...<br />
^ That part is so cute! Ahh! Omg! Fairy godmothers FTW! xD<br />
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Whee~~ Kitty and Kyu Jong are together!!~~ ^__^*<br />
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"Jung Min is still looking for someone."<br />
HAHAHAHA. ROFL<br />
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All in all, the fic was well done! It was so adorable. I loved how you altered the "original" Cinderella story to a Yee creation. The foreward was nice, too. It summed up a lot ^^ At first I was like, "What, this is it? Dx" But then went to the next page. XD The interaction between the SS501 members was also cute. Jung Min being violent was so funny~ :D The only thing I have to mention is that there are some grammar mistakes. But no big deal, right?
hydeist3 #3
(Part 1) Just to warn you, this is a really random "review"... I just wrote comments while I was reading it. Mian.<br />
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Hyunarella XDD Love the name!!<br />
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It's awesome how you have Leader as the God of the Universe... And MinJun as the dark angels. LOL<br />
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KYAA~ A love relationship between an angel and a vampire~ ^___^ The reaction between the two is so cute! Love at first sight~ :D<br />
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Argh! I want to punch the stepmother and stepsisters in their faces! LOL. (Sorry, umma, Kimmie, and Ana XD And yes, you did do a good job with making them horrible) It's so sad how they threw out Hyunarella's blood... And locked her out... Hmph! :<<br />
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(BTW, did you ever read Ella Enchanted? There's a fairy in it called Mandy! :D I know it's just a coincidence. But it's still cool. xD)<br />
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I love how Kitty waited for Hyunarella outside of her school xD KYAA~~ You just made my day! ^_^ Picked up and petted by Kyu! :D <3 TQ!! It's also hilarious how Hyunarella's cat's name is Kitty. HAHAHA~<br />
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"The event will be held tomorrow on Friday night, at the downtown park, in the UFO." XDDD Really funny for some reason... XD The mini alien handing out flyers was cute too~!!<br />
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The world you created is cool!! It was a bit confusing at first, but then it became clear that it was a mystical creature world. :D How they all mingle is cool~ =w=<br />
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“I was just leaving; I was just having too much fun watching Hyun Joong beating you.” LOL. XD<br />
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Eish! == The dress that they destroyed! ><;;<br />
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Hyun Bi and Cheong Su! OMG! XDD Their entrances were so funny... xD Somehow I can imagine Bells and Thuy jiejie to be like that. And oh hey, Kitty got turned into a hybrid human! ^_^
Malexx28 #4
Ahahahaahahahahahaha!!!! I so enjoyed your story!!! But why am i that evil??? I didn't like how it ended in my case.... you should at least couple me with the black angel Jung Min... U evil Hyundarella!!! Love the lil alien thing! ahahahahaha!! “I messed around with planets, and moved the people around!” ahahaahahahahaaaa!!! I couldn't stop laughing!!! you're a pro!!! hahahahaaha!! But next time... i don't care if i'm good or evil.. can u please let me have a happy ending with Jung Min? :D
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