Chapter 1: Hey bae its yo unnie, I have to make a little suggestion! Don't get me wrong this fic is beautiful but the formatting is a bit of a clutter, just make little spaces between paragraphs when you begin to make a new point or talk about a different subject, just to make it a little easier to read.
Chapter 2: •_• that short namjin tho BUT OH SHES NOT ACTUALLY A GIRL ndjeirnkslwldj PLOT TWIST IS TOO MUCH. What could her being a boy have to do with the story? I WONNDDEERR
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