Sehnsucht

Description

Sometimes, he wonders about the what ifs. If they would become as close as she was with the others had they not been stuck together in this sham. If they had been friends instead of acquaintances before everything blew up.

Foreword

Sometimes, I feel bad for writing about real people. So take everything with a pinch of salt.

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Zhee2014 #1 Mar 26, 2015 00:43:05

Chapter 1: Gary's POV. Well, will you write it from JH's POV? I'd love to read what's in her head, written from your perspective :)

spadenoace #2 Mar 22, 2015 20:23:41

Chapter 1: Can I ask what the title means by the way?

spadenoace #3 Mar 22, 2015 20:23:11

Chapter 1: Oh this is lovely, and you've done a wonderful job addressing one of the questions of MC (I'm not really an MC shipper but this was good enough to comment my gods) because I do feel like if there wasn't that loveline trope to play I don't know how their interactions would be, and arguably she probably still is the most comfortable paired with Sukjin (although the screentime is something worth considering) and Jaesuk and everyone else because they got to know each other instead of everything happening so fast you know?
And it's so refreshing to see such a nice analysis of that fact (the metaphor about the race and the finish line ribbon was absolute gold) and see Gary being the thoughtful one when he's easily made into either the very essence of good or bad depending on the fic
...And I do have to say it must be taxing for all people involved to see a reel/television relationship publicized and "dissected" as you've said by fans and people alike because it's not even a TV program but they are playing characters of themselves so that line is blurred than if it simply had been a TV show.
It really is such a wonderful fic ; A ;