The Thorn By My Side: The Beauty and The Princes (Review)
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Title: The Thorn By My Side: Beauty & The Princes
Author: pikaseo
Title(5/5): It fits the story so I've got no problem to give it perfect 5 :)
Poster(5/5): It's awesome :) Just wow, fantastic baby~
Foreword(9/10): In my POV, you've got an eye-catching forward that can attract readers to read more and more. It really conveys my feeling to be that 'someone' who was Kris' worst nightmare. You include the kissing part which for me, it's not an easy thing to do.
However, there's some correction here. Instead of using
'All the world seemed to stop...'
I would prefer 'The whole world seemed to stop'.
Characters(8/10): Through the story, I can see characters develop very well. I really like the way you introduce the characters.However it can be expected that Seohyun will end up with Kris. It's better if you keep it as a secret and let the 'Kris vs Minho' war begins.
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