The Thorn By My Side: The Beauty and The Princes (Review)

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Title: The Thorn By My Side: Beauty & The Princes

Author: pikaseo

 

Title(5/5): It fits the story so I've got no problem to give it perfect 5 :)

Poster(5/5): It's awesome :) Just wow, fantastic baby~

Foreword(9/10): In my POV, you've got an eye-catching forward that can attract readers to read more and more. It really conveys my feeling to be that 'someone' who was Kris' worst nightmare. You include the kissing part which for me, it's not an easy thing to do. 

However, there's some correction here. Instead of using

'All the world seemed to stop...'

I would prefer 'The whole world seemed to stop'.

Characters(8/10): Through the story, I can see characters develop very well. I really like the way you introduce the characters.However it can be expected that Seohyun will end up with Kris. It's better if you keep it as a secret and let the 'Kris vs Minho' war begins. 

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DaltheBadassHijabi
#1
Hello, I re-submitted the form because I forgot some details in the previous form. So sorry for the trouble.
DaltheBadassHijabi
#2
Hello! I requested for an advertisement for a story which I'm co-authoring, although I didn't mention it in the form. I hope that's fine.
blissfulcoconuts
#3
Chapter 9: and also in my review you spelled the title like
Title (10/10) my deerest dear
its my dearest deer
blissfulcoconuts
#4
I requested for a advertisement! thank you! how much is it?
blissfulcoconuts
#5
Chapter 9: HI! its me again! sandunind the author of my dearest deer! thanks for it again and do you mind if I requested for a ad? and how much will it cost? or are you busy?
Laulau95
#6
I requested for a review ^^
kuchens
#7
Chapter 14: Thank you so much for the nice review!! Asdfghjkl. That's what I felt. haha. For the title, I think I'll stick to 'if I' since 'what if' is a quite common title. Xp
I definitely will change my foreword just like what you had suggested. Thanks for the correction and everything! ^^
Fyi, I actually wrote this story as my essay in my English exam recently but in a shorter version. Lol.
kuchens
#8
I requested! ^^