Memories of You

Description

It's only been a few months since Hakyeon left him, but Taekwoon is losing- no, has already lost his mind.

Foreword

When I close my eyes, I can feel your arms around me

When I open my eyes, I can see you smiling at me

You lean down, you peck my forehead, then you’re gone

As if you never existed, but I can still feel the warmth of your lips

Everywhere I look, there’s a part of you

Everywhere I go, every corner I turn around

Every single step of the way is filled with memories of you

It's only been a few months since Hakyeon left him, but Taekwoon is losing- no, has already lost his mind. He sees Hakyeon every where, he hears Hakyeon's voice all the time, and he just can't keep in mind the fact that Hakyeon is not with him anymore.

 

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Totomatoes #1
Chapter 1: Awe this is really sweet! And that Iljae at the end seeing Neo being happy after death, that's so cute. I like it v v v much, especially the technique of alternating between present and past! This is really bittersweet and warm!
vixxcha #2
so sad..T.T..crying...nice story authornim..
Chocoholic_freak #3
Chapter 1: What is the song on this fanfic??
neon9520
#4
Chapter 1: omo... This fanfiction is like awesome! :) i really love it...
DevilNextToYou #5
Are the words on your foreword lyrics? Of an official song
mistressofsecrecy1 #6
Chapter 1: it was so sad...but ifeel bad for being okay with Taekwoon's ...agh i am so scared of the word i don't wanna say it...but you know
maybe because of the ending...you made it so light hearted ^^

but the whole thing really pulls at your heart...so clap for you for making such a good story...but how did Taek go in here? sitting in the cold for too long or just unknown?

Thanks for thsi again!
Nubukatpoop
#7
Good job , write more :D
canxer00 #8
Chapter 1: this is so ironic.. yet beautiful.. I love it!!! good job!!
devils_solitude
#9
Chapter 1: Ahhh, you broke my heart ;u; /definitely shouldn't read such fics in the morning/ I love how you opened with a dream/flashback to ease the readers into Taekwoon's situation, before suddenly switching to the present. The effect is abrupt, but by disorienting the readers, you've managed to augment the feeling of hopelessness and loss. Pretty neat way to start, if you ask me! ;D Interspersing Taekwoon's memories throughout Taekwoon's (final; /gets shot/) journey, on top of describing his memories as near physical manifestations to him really drives home how much he misses Hakyeon (and breaks our hearts in the process ><). I'm not sure if the lyrics are self-composed or an actual song (/hasn't listened to new English songs in years OTL), but if it's the former, some additional foreshadowing to Taekwoon's ultimate fate would've elevated the emotional impact. That said, I still felt the painful tugging of my heartstrings as I read this, so great job! :D /goes off to find cute photos of animals OTL/
OttokajiNoJams #10
Chapter 1: This was so sad but amazing at the same time. Totally didn't expect that to happen at the end, but it was beautiful. Loved it.