Chapter 1: cliffhanger. : ( but i really liked the story and how you related it to real life situations. the characters were also not so cliche - like, using both brain and heart. ahaha. two thumbs up! (y)
Chapter 1: i like the introduction, the story, the tips and almost everything. the introduction really catches me, it was well written. the story was a bit cliffhanger but it was a great story about the guy who have a financial needs and a girl-- i pity them but we cant do anything because that's life. i thinks having a problem in relationship is natural and financial is one of the hardest problem to solve, sometimes it cause couple to ends up, that was proven on the facts i saw on the end of this and the tips! i laugh at those tips but i promise to follow them. maybe.. kidding. keep it up! i enjoy your work.
I always thought that no matter how hard the obstacle is, as long as you love each other you will never break apart; but maybe that thing only happen in a fairy tale or in a fictional book. the story really show the reality of life, well..financial status really have a great impact in a relationship, i knew people who also break apart because of this problem. and in this country that we have, poverty is one of the problem and maybe that's one of the reason why there is unsuccessful relationship today, and about the time, its really true that relationship have time together to make the relationship stronger but in the story it seems like that they don't have that much time for each other because of the financial problem of the guy, its kinda sad but yes, it was based on the reality which people should accept. overall, i really like this stuff. it was a great article to read. great job!
The story line were great, but can't deny I was amazed by the character. You still have to use your brain somehow true. Please make more stories soon, authornim jebal juseyo.
I liked how you were able to show how financial status and time can make or break a relationship. You were able to support your topic with your story and your own opinions on that matter. (Liked the tips as well.) Great job! Would love to read a sequel of this one-shot anyway!
ps. bobby tho. ahaha. give me a barbie band aid, papi.
Chapter 1: WOW. I mean this is a really good article. what made it more interesting is that you used real life situations and real life characters and putting in a fanfiction kinda story. they say money can't buy happiness but come on. we can't really guarantee that especially when we're in a crisis. TIME also plays a really huge part in a relationship. nothing will work well if you don't give time on it. Job well done and thank you for the tips.
oh, what a great story. this one caught my attention because it's based on real life. sometimes, financial status is really a hindrance in response to relationship, and time of course; we women also need time to be with our loved ones because it's very difficult to be with them specially if our rival is the means of living. The tips tho, thanks. : ) : ) : )
no to cliffhanger u gh. whut happened? tell me. : ( kidding. i lurve yer story!1!!1! author-nim autograph juseyooo- ay.
The title really caught my attention here bc i was wondering why it was entitled What Lies In Between and as i read the whole article i foundout why. It was a great story with a mix of humor and information as well. I really like how you insert the story as the example of the financial problem that really does happen to our our life and mostly lot of people can related to this stuff. Well, even thought it wasn't about love relationship-- financial is a problem like in family. Maybe the saying that money is evil was true. And about the time, i do agree. it a must in every relationship. ofcourse. who would be so stupid to marry someone who he or she just met right? Lastly, the tips! It was awesome and almost crack me up. I haven't into a relationship but im pretty sure im gonna follow one your tips! I Enjoy reading this. Looking forward for another stuff like this. : >
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