Love Beneath Hypocrisy - Contest Entry

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                                                                                                                                                                                        Prologue

                The long fingers stretch out hesitatingly and slowly curl around my deadened hands. They grasp my wrist forcefully, with a strength that I would not have believed he had. His eyes reluctantly travel up the concrete wall and meet my own, and for a moment, I forget my pain. He inches closer to me ever so slightly that it is almost indiscernible in the dim beam of the flickering lamppost. I flinch at his touch, almost involuntarily and in that impulsive gesture I pummel his life. His lips, startlingly crimson in comparison to the rest of him, align themselves into a small, poignant line. I sigh and gradually draw him towards myself, unsure of my own actions. He flashes me a shadow of a smile and presumptuously places his head on my outstretched legs. I feel a single bout of laughter revisiting me and happiness seems to return. His head rests peacefully on my frozen legs. His long, blonde, unkempt hair falls over my torn trousers. I timidly raise one hand and lightly lay it over his assaulted hair. His eyelids droop downward at the touch. They cover his enticing, tired eyes and he falls into a fitful slumber. My hand remains where it was, inadvertently providing him and my own self a strange sort of solace. His breathing turns even and the flickering lamppost gives away. Darkness falls.

                  His body turns still, and his free hand envelopes mine. I wonder what earthly relation I possess with this being that makes us so comfortable with each other. Yes, indeed, I have not an inkling of the identity of the person who is peacefully sleeping on my legs. Yet, yet, the blood that courses through our veins hints at similarity. It is a blood that is mutual and wordlessly, we understand each other. Words are empty. There is no need for those frivolous utterances when the union is so very apparent. His face is strikingly Far Eastern. His long eyes curves at the edges and his teeth gleam with whiteness. His face was far too fair and to belong to the crumpled lives of India. Yes, he is undoubtedly Korean. And, how am I so sure of that fact? Well, maybe because I am Korean too. After almost ten years of living in a land that I was strained to call my home, I finally now chance upon a little boy, a frail being with whom I share the bond of speech.

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               It was the dawn of the 20th Century AD. India was still writhing beneath the steely grips of the ruthless British administration. Fighting feebly against the infallible might of the conquerors, India was visibly degrading herself, as she lay there too fragile to overthrow the rule. Cringing with horror at the torture inflicted upon her children, Mother India screamed out to the Gods, pleading for justice. But, none came. The bond of brotherhood that kept the Indians together was weakening, their confidence in their own selves was shaken, their lives were marred, their sight was scarred, and they were terrified of the future. The many petty conflicts that abounded in the small states and kingdoms served well to further annihilate the unanimity among the Indians. The British realm grew stronger, more aggressive, and India remained passive enough to let it thrive. Her roads were dusty and unstable, her people were worn out and weary, her life was slowly being out of her, happiness was unheard of in her vicinity. She was India; this was her circumstance, exploited thoroughly by that species of Humans that didn’t deserve to live. And she couldn’t fight back.




 

Foreword

        Okay, here's my terribly rushed, extraordinarily late, almost thoughtless entry for the Two Mins, One Love Contest. Wow, I just have my foreword and description up and the deadline is in what? Two and a half days? Ah, well...I can dream of finishing the fic by then. I wasn't really sure which prompt went well with the story, but I'll go with the first one since I'm partial to it. After all, it is true; The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched – they must be felt with the heart.

Here's the link to the contest. Though I really don't know of what use will it be me putting it up so late.


http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/73482/two-mins-one-love-writing-contest-2min-contest-fluff-minho-romance-taemin-

Yeah, ! My life~ 
            Anyway, I understand the description's foggy, but I take immense pride in keeping it that way, really. This story is set in 20th century Korea and India. I really don't know why I chose India, but somehow that setting made it more poignant. This is before India gained independence. Well, most of you may not know the history of India, so I'm not going to bore you. Let's just say India was under the rule of the British up till 1947, alright? Don't ask me when the invasion first happened, 'cause I really don't know...-_- I forget my history.

            Well, I cross my fingers and hope I complete the fic before the deadline! (Forget winning, that's way out of my league) Hehe~ I'm sort of promoting India and Korea friend relations with this fic! (It's all to get K-POP to India!) Come to India, Taemin? Please?

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sabotageshae
#1
Chapter 6: Your writing is really beautiful.
caline
#2
They don't seem like they are dying! The ending is like a hopeful beginning. I love it! *-*
caline
#3
HEY! Add the 2mincest tag XD
twomint
#4
This is so touching ;~;
nayeli21
#5
I loved this fic, it was truly beautiful and heartbreaking to see them apart for so long, but I'm happy reading they survived and now rule korea together :D
Mistral
#6
I don't think its a happy ending.. They found each other, but it looks like they are dying..
caline
#7
I can't wait to read your entry <3
Maarja #8
Wow... you writing style is absolutely beautiful! I love your use of words