Chapter 1: Woahhhh i liked it so much you have no idea. The characterization is really good ; with Jaehwan being a waverer and Wonshik having to deal with it and the range of emotions it gives him... Ahhh i wish i could put better into words my thoughts! It was well-thought and well-written! Thanks for sharing!
"It was then that Wonshik realized Jaehwan was spinning round and round alongside him, equally powerless against the strings that tied them together. Jaehwan was still the puppeteer, yes, but he just hadn’t learned control yet. He was insecure, uncertain, frightened of his own power, and thus couldn’t help but be yanked along himself by his fears."
This is my favourite part. And that last line oh my god.
It just. Wow. The way you described their relationship with the puppeteer imagery is just. Wow. It's such a spot on and amazing analogy.
Chapter 1: Aww this is so lovely. I really love the crazy dynamics of Wonsik and Jaehwan's relationship that you highlighted here. The rollercoaster ride of emotions Wonsik feels he's on yet how he feels cared for and grounded at the same time...somehow you put into words something that is almost indescribable and I love it. There's so much feeling in this.
Recently I've noticed a lot more cute moments between these two, especially the number of times Wonsik has exclaimed "cute" at something Jaehwan does, with a giggle. Perfect timing to be reading such a lovely story about them :)
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