One Jump Ahead

Description

Abandoned on the streets, abandoned by society- could they really be blamed for turning their backs on the system altogether?

The only thing they’d ever been gifted with by the world was each other. 

Foreword

Thanks to hiphopbabylion for listening to my constant whining every step of the way OTL

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namjinxed
#1
Chapter 1: this is very good. Very rare fanfic author use this theme and I'm glad when u portray the poverty perfectly and really realistic. Thank u for writing :)
aldnoah38 #2
Chapter 1: That was goooood!!! Author-niiiim make a sequel and give me a bnior kiss scene plssssss x)
floralis #3
Chapter 1: A really great story ! I already read it two times and i still enjoyed it ! Really you did a perfect job there :)
Thank you for this story ^^
Kiirome75 #4
Chapter 1: I was so confused at the start since i'm not a native speaker so I had to google so many words to understand what was happening and comes the "Enough to live comfortably with you" part and I was smiling like a idiot an then comes the beeps and I think and all this is to say that I loved it. Thank you.
Cisoon93 #5
Chapter 1: Oh my gooooooosssssssssssssshh!!! So well written and so good!!! I'm lost for words!! THANK YOU FOR THIS AMAZING STORY!!!!!!! But if I can suggest, an epiloge o better some sequel chapters will be great also, just saying. ;) <3333
Matata #6
Chapter 1: Sequeeeeeeeeeeeel!!!!
psycho_d
#7
Chapter 1: JJP TT_______TT♡