Marionette

Description

 

"Darling so it goes...


 

Her life was mapped out from the moment she was conceived, her future written in notebooks and planners.  There was no way to function without feeling someone pull the strings, the ends always had a means.   In a sense, life was a game where the best players came out on top.  Exceptions did not exist.  Yet there he was, basically a non-player character, but somehow unique and intriguing.  Looking from the outside-in, there was nothing special about him.  From the inside-out, rose colored glasses gave her clarity and hope.

She would watch as others controlled him quietly.

(If only he knew what they were doing.)

She would watch him shine in an abyss of despair.  

(If only they knew they were losing.)

 


...some things are meant to be."

 

 

Foreword

PHello everyone!

This is a contest entry for Annie1017 and MusicChibi's EXOplosion Writing Contest!  I encourage you to check out the contest for yourself, but otherwise, please enjoy my newest one shot.

~Admin K

 

Warning: Swearing

 

Note: "Darling so it goes, some things are meant to be" is a line from Elvis Presley's song "Can't Help Falling In Love."

 

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starmyst
#1
Chapter 1: The words that strung together to form their thoughts, how deep they were and how they both had differing view of the world. It was wonderfully done and I enjoyed the way it ended as well, the vague nature of it.
Thank you for writing it <3
heyitsme94
#2
Chapter 1: I loved it. It's rare that you come across such a well written one-shot that has every ingredient that it needs to deem it flawless. Wonderful.
I love the irony in the fact that they both found balance in the contrast of their nature.
PS- I noticed an innocent error in the first flashback, the last paragraph. Lay regards to Soeun as Doctor Park. :)
Unicorn900201
#3
Chapter 1: perfect story ☻ I'm glad you made a sequel!!
Eld0rado
#4
Chapter 1: Oh that was beautiful. I really like the way you write. It flows so easily. /0/
skyblue8210 #5
Sequel? I really enjoyed your writing, it has a flow to it and you use great vocabulary. ^_^ Please don't let their story end here ;__;