NOTICE

Where is my mommy?

HEY EVERYONE!

I'm feeling so good after a long time hiatus. I didn't really have time to write my story or check back my story.

Now I'm on break from the study so I decided to write again this story but I will change a little bit from this one.

I realised I had so many grammar mistakes back then.

I hope my grammar and spelling are improving than before. So don't forget to check out my latest story.

(NOT REALLY LATEST. I JUST WRITE THIS STORY AGAIN BUT I GONNA CHANGE LITTLE BIT AND MAKE IT LONGER)

NEWEST FANFIC: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1408516/mommy

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Daffodill #1
I thought it was gonna be sad but it was so cute!!
Lemonny_chan #2
Chapter 3: This is so cute... hmmmm about your grammar try reading more english stories so that u could gain more understanding. Hoped this helps.
Squibund #3
Chapter 3: Thanks for helps... Aigoo.. What should I do with my grammar ~~ =…=
LovesAsianDrama #4
Chapter 3: I really enjoyed reading the story. The concept was awesome honestly. But between the grammar and misspelled word it was hard. You really should go back and proofread through it.

Like when you said "he was unconsciously" it should be "unconscious" or when "he was sat by the bed" it should be "when he was sitting by the bed"

Honestly it is a really good story and I hope I didn't hurt your feelings (as it was not my intent) just wanted you to know. ^.^
Rinininette #5
Chapter 3: The plot is quite good, with family sacrifice and angst that made me cry xD
But it's a little short and there are many grammar and vocabulary mistakes x) like "bustard" instead of "bastard" (Our Yifan is teaching bad words to his daughter), there's more ^^'
You can improve and readproof it, I think you can do it when you have time :)
Thanks for the fic
asdfghjkl_xD #6
Chapter 2: Wahhhhhh! Tao! Please update soon author-nim :)))
KouAkira #7
Chapter 2: What the.....poor Taozi....;____;
kkamjonghunnie #8
Chapter 1: Poor Taozi T^T bad bad zhoumi go awayyy from Taozi. T^T its a nice start actually ^^
PaulineJung #9
Chapter 1: Please update faster as soon as possible
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