Where is my mommy?

Description

 One day,Yifan was sitting on bench beside his company.Suddenly,there is little girl ran to him.

"Daddy!!" shouted a little girl.Yifan looked at her and smiled.He picked up her and kissed her cheeks.

Then,unexpected question came out from his daugther's mouth.

Yes,his daugther.She was took care by Yifan after his wifewas gone.I means his wife left him.

"Daddy,where is mommy? I was jealous when my friends had a mommy and daddy," She pouted.

Yifan frowned.

What will Yifan do after his daughter asked for his mommy?

Foreword

Hello..

Well,I likes to write new story after saw Sophia and Yifan at Somewhere Only We Know teaser.

Yifan is a great father in that film~~ (film or movie?)

 

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Daffodill #1
I thought it was gonna be sad but it was so cute!!
Lemonny_chan #2
Chapter 3: This is so cute... hmmmm about your grammar try reading more english stories so that u could gain more understanding. Hoped this helps.
Squibund #3
Chapter 3: Thanks for helps... Aigoo.. What should I do with my grammar ~~ =…=
LovesAsianDrama #4
Chapter 3: I really enjoyed reading the story. The concept was awesome honestly. But between the grammar and misspelled word it was hard. You really should go back and proofread through it.

Like when you said "he was unconsciously" it should be "unconscious" or when "he was sat by the bed" it should be "when he was sitting by the bed"

Honestly it is a really good story and I hope I didn't hurt your feelings (as it was not my intent) just wanted you to know. ^.^
Rinininette #5
Chapter 3: The plot is quite good, with family sacrifice and angst that made me cry xD
But it's a little short and there are many grammar and vocabulary mistakes x) like "bustard" instead of "bastard" (Our Yifan is teaching bad words to his daughter), there's more ^^'
You can improve and readproof it, I think you can do it when you have time :)
Thanks for the fic
asdfghjkl_xD #6
Chapter 2: Wahhhhhh! Tao! Please update soon author-nim :)))
KouAkira #7
Chapter 2: What the.....poor Taozi....;____;
kkamjonghunnie #8
Chapter 1: Poor Taozi T^T bad bad zhoumi go awayyy from Taozi. T^T its a nice start actually ^^
PaulineJung #9
Chapter 1: Please update faster as soon as possible
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