Escape

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Description

But he caught my eyes, he with his big brown orbs that could melt you inside,

those lips that are shaped like a heart, those lips were tempting...

Foreword

I entered the contest made by kimichi21a.

 

The rules are that it must be only MBLAQ- only story it could be straight or it doesn't matter.

It can be drabble or one-shot, no multi-chapter allowed.

 

Started: 03.01.2015

Finished: 10.02.2015

Note: I'm sorry if some parts are a bit rushed or have mistakes. It is mainly Joon's point of view, but in some parts it is G.O's - you will see. 

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Tanai32
#1
Good couple
bbangster #2
Chapter 1: Oh My God this will be one of my favourite stories from you author-nim. I freaking love it.

I love that it was from Joon's point of view and how he sees the world around him. The way he sees Mir trembling on that faithfull day.
Everything is perfectly written and i enjoyed every minute of it. I loved every character especially Seungho's because his love for G.O stopped him doing things to Joon. TO think about it, I think that Cheondung knew about Seungho's feelings towards G.O and made him do things so that he will appear more fierce and to don't have any feelings for G.O
I hate Cheondung in this story, he is such an evil King, killing his wife because she cheated on him with another - i think she was right to cheat - Cheondung became more distant and cold after she gave life to the girl.

G.O here is my fave, he really cares for Mir and for those years when Mir was in prison in his whole life G.O was there for him. Caring and reassuring him that everything is alright.
As for Mir I 'm really gratefull that he became the King now, if he didn't escape from the prison -like-kingdom then he wouldn't meet Joon nor be free again. His character here makes me wanna cry, because I think his mother and G.O loved him only - and now that Joon is here for him he feels save..
Joon and Mir looks so cute together, I love that Joon has the power to control wind/air and Mir is telekinesis, and i have never thought that Cheondung can teleport and Seungho can be strong and fast.

The End especially killed me.... The way with just a few words you described how they are going to do their first time together. It was magical for me

I LOVE IT ^^
Karenkitty1092 #3
Chapter 1: This was super interesting and hopefully you can do a sequel