Ipod Boyfriend : It's Not Just An App REVIEW

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Title (5/5)   It grabs my attention and refuses to give it back until I click on it!! and it DEFINATELY fits the story

Does it grab my attenion? Is it appealing? Does it relate to the story?

 

Description/ Foreward (3/5)  The description and forward were okay, but not making scream for more. Maybe leave off in a cliffhanger and introduce the characters:D

Does it make me want to read the story?

 

Main plot (20/20)    I can honestly say I've never seen this plot before and the order was perfectly enumerated:D It makes sence and everything^^

Is it over used? Does it make sence? Nice sequence of events?

 

Poster (10/10)    I love the ipod with the Boyfriend picture inside of it^^ and I also like how in the story you showed the ipod page whis all of the tabs and what the website actually looked like:DD

Does it fit the story?

 

Chapter names (9/10)  
Almost all of the titles fit perfectly except the ones that I didn't understand simply because I didn;t know what it meant(:

Is it just random or does it actually fit?

 

Would I subscribe and keep reading?(10/10)     Hell yes!!! I FREAKING love this story! It makes me love Boyfriend EVEN more^^

Total: (47/50)    
Trust me, that's bomb diggity^^

My comments:You are a VERY talented author^^ You are the first author who actually made me cry while reading a fic, I usually need to see the expressions and hear everything, but when I read it, it was all vividly playing in my mind:D

 

 

 

Seriously, you MUST read it^^

Click here: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/93112/ipod-boyfriend-it-s-not-just-an-app

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LittlePanda15 #1
Username:LittlePanda15

Story link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/260263/1/oneshot-collection-d-angst-comedy-romance--depressed

Title:Stand up

Quotes?:Whatever takes you down ,there will always be something that is worth standing up again for
(I hope its not too long )

Theme colors(preferrably two) :grey , brown-gold

People you want on the poster :Miss A Min ,Shinee Taemin

By :LittlePanda15

Extra:Thanks in advance and its a chapter poster :D
Ilonahaku #2
Nice, I liked especially the posters in chapter 11 and 14. :)
boyfriend_fanfics #3
Username: Boyfriend_fanfics

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/183381/t-r-o-u-b-l-e-minwoo-youngmin-kwangmin-donghyun-hyunseong-jeongmin-yoondoojoon

Title: T.R.O.U.B.L.E

Quotes?: 'You're Too pretty to be '

Theme colors(preferrably two) : red and black

People you want on the poster: Jo Youngmin | Jo Kwangmin |yoon doojoon | ulzzang girl

By : Boyfriend_fanfics

Extra: Thank you so much~
SweetMemoriesForever #4
Username: SweetMemoriesForever

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/138818/me-and-you-donghae-kyuhyun-siwon-superjunior-yesung-ocgirl

Title: Me and You

Quotes?: Things can never be perfect, life isn't that simple.

Theme colors(preferrably two) : Purple and Blue

People you want on the poster: Donghae/Siwon/Yesung/Eeteuk of Super Junior and 4 Ulzzangs- I'll let you pick ^^

By: SweetMemoriesForever

Extra:Hwaiting!
Seaworld24 #5
I'd like to cancel my review please.
sweetcandy13 #6
thank you ^^
THE poster is CUTE :3
sweetcandy13 #7
um... my request is a chapter poster... is it alright?? :)
sweetcandy13 #8
Username: sweetcandy13

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/135756

Title: Unnie, Thanks for Ruining My Life

Quotes?: But thanks to you unnie... that I met him...

Theme colors(preferrably two) : peachy pink and sky blue (light)

People you want on the poster(if you have an ulzzang in mind please give name. If you have a picture already give image location. If not any of those, just person's name or group name) : Park Eun Mi (OC, fic)- http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/403671_309495842436486_100001282187825_949836_1008761745_n.jpg
Lee Howon (INFINITE), Lee Sungyeol (infinite), Kim Myungsoo (INFINITE)

By ( you and co author's name, if you have a coauthor) : sweetcandy13

Extra: thank you very much ^^ i am enternally greatful :D
BurgundyVibes #9
thnx so much:) luv it already<3
BurgundyVibes #10
Username: babewithbrains

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/111019
Title: STORY OF MY LIFE

Quotes?: Dino vs Diva?

Theme colors(preferrably two) : Red and Black

People you want on the poster(if you have an ulzzang in mind please give name. If you have a picture already give image location. If not any of those, just person's name or group name) :

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_deEp33vjRVw/TQXRgKWWIOI/AAAAAAAAKTk/XjRXnW7j6TQ/s1600/s hinee201127.jpg

http://29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lhviprDu9q1qfrjrxo1_500.png

By ( you and co author's name, if you have a coauthor) : babewithbrains

Extra: so for this chapter, Jonghyun is basically jealous of Key and Star, so he stalks them. Is there any way, you could make this poster look kinda sneaky? Like Jonghyun is following key! thank you:)
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