I Love a Taken Man~REVEIW
SushiandJonghyun's Poster Shop! [[Closed for Business]]Title (3/5) I've heard similar titles, maybe next time put something more eye catching, but it DOES go with the story^^
Does it grab my attenion? Is it appealing? Does it relate to the story?
Description/ Foreward (5/5)
I like the fact that you put a teaser, explained everything, and put additional charactoer information. Putting the reader's username in the parenthesis for the 'you' character was just icing on the cake^^
Does it make me want to read the story?
Main plot (18/20)
The only thing I really knocked you down for was changing POV's suddenly and with no warning and it moved a little fast for my taste. But the story line and cute romantic parts were great:D
Is it over used? Does it make sence? Nice sequence of events?
Poster (8/10)
By all means it's not bad but it should relate to the story more.
Does it fit the story?
Chapter names (10/10)
They always relate to the chapter so perfect score for that^^
Is it just random or does it actually fit?
Would I subscribe and keep reading?(10/10)
Yes, and I plan to^^ It's pretty good and I was hitting the next chapter butting while biting my bottom lip in anticipation:D
Total: (44/50)
Read I Love a Taken Man here^^
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