-his precious little princess (reveiw)
SushiandJonghyun's Poster Shop! [[Closed for Business]]Title (4/5) It does grab my attention and makes me want to read it, but I knocked points off due to not capitalizing and the "-" thingy.^_^
Does it grab my attenion? Is it appealing? Does it relate to the story?
Description/ Foreward (5/5) Omo, this was mysterious and a cliff hanger^-^ I was thinking, did he die? How did he die? Or was it just near death? and WHO is his preacious little princess? You made it practically impossible for the reader to not click next.
Does it make me want to read the story?
Main plot (20/20) Omfg. Are you trying to make me like smash my computer to pieces? I was sad and angry at the parents! Mianhae, getting away from the point. The plot was COMPLETELY original. Never read anything like it on asianfanfics.
Is it over used? Does it make sence? Nice sequence of events?
Poster (NA/10)
Does it fit the story?
Chapter names (NA/10)
Is it just random or does it actually fit?
Would I subscribe and keep reading?(10/10) I would subscribe and read it again! :D
Total: (39/40)
My comments: This was tear-jerkingly wonderful. :') I loved it^-^
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