Chapter 3: Omg, topbom. Huhu nooo my topbom heart :(
Next pleasee authornim

Chapter 3: Kekeke topbom! :D

Chapter 1: Woahh what happened to jiyong? Why he dissappear in the past?
And I agree with others, pleasee put (") to conversation cause it's kinda confusing me. 

Chapter 1: it seems interesting! i like it! but i think it'll be better if u put (") and space to each conversation to make it easier for us reading it. thankss

Intresting but im a bit confused please put mark for conversation.thanjs

Chapter 1: To conversation please mark (")

iam really love your storry gbom :) ...

Yeyy new gbom fanfic. I'm looking forward for this!

Where is the next button?kk

looking forward :)