Freeze Me

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The legend of Ice Demon and Fire Goddess.

[CONTENTID2]on top the singing hill sits an asylum[/CONTENTID2][CONTENTID1]

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from The Pitcher (Aero Chord Remix)

 

"What is it you draw this time, Misa?" The doctor speaks her name clearly as he addresses her from behind. He peers over her thin shoulders most cautiously to see a face framed in a mane of luscious hair... the color of ripen cranberries. "She has a very sweet expression on her face..."

His honesty is not well received.

"I have told you countless times, doctor. She is trying to trick you. She tricks everyone into believing what she wants them to believe. You should try not to fall for her. You should at least... try."

The doctor stops. He knows better than to agitate her. His patient's case is most sensitive. Her outburst of violence are not to be taken lightly. "It is as you say, Misa. Is it almost time for her to leave?" He eyes the innocent, white box sitting on the table. A plain, white box... with no signs of age.

"Almost."

"Can you, Misa? Can you tell me again about the Fire Goddess? How she came to be inside this little white box of yours?"

The girl stares blankly at the white box for a while before granting the doctor's wish. "The Fire Goddess..." She begins the tale. "She was a very, very naughty spirit. She enjoyed playing tricks and tormenting others. It greatly amused her. The trouble was... her little tricks were rarely harmless. Because of one prank in particular, she was placed inside this little white box. You see, she could not be made to see the seriousness of such sinful acts. That one prank... it exterminated an entire race of demons, wrecking everlasting scars. You remember, doctor? The Ice Demon's beautiful face... scarred beyond recognition? The infliction had sent him into a deep slumber. So deep, it bordered true death. And so, for two hundred years, he sleeps. And two hundred years, the elder gods have sentenced her... to two hundred years of imprisonment... to repent, to change her wicked, wicked ways. Will she change? Will she be forgiven? When the Ice Demon wakes... he will be in a fit of rage... to know... he is the very last of his kind."

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sweetcandy65 #1
Chapter 1: Congrats! ^_^
000054 #2
Chapter 1: Congratulations
kaiishi #3
Chapter 1: Congrats on the feature
Champions27 #4
Chapter 4: whoa, the language.. is very, very good. I got into the story! this is a really good one!
jaedrug #5
Chapter 4: Waaahhh! Why does it feel like Jaejoong has deceived them all into thinking that he's truly mourning for the tragedy that has befallen his kind. That he's the innocent victim here. T^T I'm now inclined to believe that it has all been orchestrated by him and Xinling is just there to make everything happen. I think he'll soon kill the elder gods and find Xinling to be with her again. After all, they're not the stupid ones in this fic. ^^

As always, you've delivered an amazing story. I didn't expect the ending to be like this. Really nice! ^^
jaedrug #6
Chapter 3: I forgot about his scars. T^T

Poor Jaejoong. It must have been difficult for him. I don't know if it would have been better for him to stay in deep sleep and remain elusive to everything, or finally be awake to exact his revenge on her. Xinling is such an intriguing character. When you described her whispers to be ' psychotic and possessive', that definitely made everything so much darker and exciting. >_< I' sure Jaejoong's not happy with what she shared so I'm anticipating his response on the next chap. Uwaah! Jaejoong, are you going to be violent on the next update? I hope not. >_<
jaedrug #7
Chapter 2: Oh, so she's Xinling... I would have never guessed. I really thought she was just a patient who knew things. It excites me to know that Jaejoong will soon wake from his slumber. I wonder how he will react once he finds out that he's the last of his kind. He'll probably not be as eager to be with her as she is to him. I can picture him in my mind, sleeping like a prince....*sigh* So beautiful.
Bookworm01 #8
Misa's knowledge of the Fire Goddess and the Ice Demon intrigues me. Surely, a girl like her (is she human? *shrugs* I don't know) wouldn't have been able to find out about that unless she witnessed it herself or had been a part of it. Of course, there's also the possibility that they are all a product of her imagination. Still, I'm keeping my fingers crossed that they're real and she just knew about them (somehow).
Where'd you get that picture of the guy (you know, the Ice Demon)? Who is he? He looks handsome (LOL I have a strange way of looking at beauty).
Anyway, looking forward to it! ^o^
jaedrug #9
*SQUEAL!!!!*
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