a short poem for jay~*COMPLETED*

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simply...7-1=0

Foreword

hii!!im kind of not new here...i just like to change my names hahas:)

 

ive made a poem quite long ago after jaebum's controversy.
the poem is kind of hard to understand so i would be telling the meaning in chapter 2.hahas

REMINDER:this poem is written by me but its base on my thoughts so please dont bash.

i just wrote it for fun
so i dont expect it to be that good but i just felt like sharing it:)

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Dailycommenter 98 streak #1
I am trying to find an old story on here but I cannot remember the title so I am going through all the story links I found this sounds interesting and has a nice description Will read soon
summer-star #2
Visiting old fics!
summer-star #3
Visiting old fics!
katkeota #4
Chapter 2: OMG! lol, I was going through my subscriptions, and you were the first person I subscribed to! ^_^
IloveBBforever #5
Good poem ! Awww Jaebeom /:<br />
I'm glad he's doing good solo now , it would be awesome if he was still with 2pm but yeah ...
OnAFallingStar #6
aww poor Jae...I still miss him after all this time, but I'm happy for his comeback.<br />
I really liked your poem...it was very profound..<br />
good job xD
kpopartory #7
NICE .. I like it
Miss_Logical #8
i finally read ur poem XD I always forget things =.= lol<br />
i understood mostly of it except the blood, i knew u didn't mean the blood so i was thinking of what u really meant then u said tears XD total opposite lol water and blood lol and for 'sue' i thought it was a name XD i was like : O.O what's that XD but now i understood ^^<br />
yeah jay is too nice to sue JYP =.= but he'll come back with his moie and has find a new company in the us ^^ so let's just be patient XD JAY FIGHTING <33 <br />
and I liked ur poem ^^
starlove #9
awww...its a sad poem....its good....the meaning is very powerful and the choice of words...
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