QUESTIONS FOR DEAREST YOU..~~~

a short poem for jay~*COMPLETED*
here is the poem...:)
its not exactly a masterpiece but yea hahas
when my non-korean-fanatic freinds read it they thought it was something about a crime but trust me...theres a hidden meaning behind it:)
hope you guys understand it
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Why are your hands full of blood?
What were you hiding behind?
Why were you abandon by the lot?
What is up inside your mind?
Why are you looking away?
What had happen to you?
Why arent you listening Jay?
What made you kill Sue?

Where would you go after this?
When are you gonna come back?
Where can you find eternal bliss?
When can you just tell them the fact?
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sorry if you guys think its rubbish but its whatever that has been going through my head?the meaning would be in next chapter hahas~
28 october 2009

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Dailycommenter 98 streak #1
I am trying to find an old story on here but I cannot remember the title so I am going through all the story links I found this sounds interesting and has a nice description Will read soon
summer-star
#2
Visiting old fics!
summer-star
#3
Visiting old fics!
katkeota
#4
Chapter 2: OMG! lol, I was going through my subscriptions, and you were the first person I subscribed to! ^_^
IloveBBforever
#5
Good poem ! Awww Jaebeom /:<br />
I'm glad he's doing good solo now , it would be awesome if he was still with 2pm but yeah ...
OnAFallingStar #6
aww poor Jae...I still miss him after all this time, but I'm happy for his comeback.<br />
I really liked your poem...it was very profound..<br />
good job xD
kpopartory
#7
NICE .. I like it
Miss_Logical
#8
i finally read ur poem XD I always forget things =.= lol<br />
i understood mostly of it except the blood, i knew u didn't mean the blood so i was thinking of what u really meant then u said tears XD total opposite lol water and blood lol and for 'sue' i thought it was a name XD i was like : O.O what's that XD but now i understood ^^<br />
yeah jay is too nice to sue JYP =.= but he'll come back with his moie and has find a new company in the us ^^ so let's just be patient XD JAY FIGHTING <33 <br />
and I liked ur poem ^^
starlove
#9
awww...its a sad poem....its good....the meaning is very powerful and the choice of words...