The kill

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I hate you, I hate you for leave me alone, here, without you. I hate you for not take me with you. I hate you for all the happy days, because we are not available to make more of that days. I hate you, because you promised me that you’d never leave me.

Jungkook

Foreword

Hi there.

This is my first time ever writing something. I have been trying before but with any succes.

The idea come out on my mind after reading 'Don't let me go' of Jessie14. That one made me cry a lot, it's so beautiful ❤

Btw, english isn't my first language, so I am sorry for all the mistakes I can made. Hope you can understand well :)

 

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aldriiiiin #1
Chapter 1: Woooooow. *wipe tears* this is so good.👍
jessie14 #2
Chapter 2: you're too nice :)
fighting :)
jessie14 #3
Chapter 1: wow that was cool
it was nice :)
i didn't no what to expect so when i came to the foreword and read it i was like 'wow she took it in a very angsty way" but it was nice :)
if you want i can help you correct some grammer errors etc if you'd like
also would you mind if i linked this story to 'don't let me go' so more ppl can read it?
jun-kiseob_b2uty #4
Chapter 1: jessie14 is really great writer, with you got inspired by her is cool too:) you've create a good stories, it is good yet heartbreaking.. i wasn't judge you because you had a grammar error, it was alright, in fact english wasn't my first language too.. i could only say thay you will get better after improving your works so this stories is good and fighting for writing another stories, don't give up!!:)
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