Chapter 1: i can't stop crying since i started to read this story TwT
i love ontae! but they'd separated! TwT
and for jongtae, hands down it was the prettiest thing to admit how much jjong love taemin and suport taemin when he was broken TwT
i really is love jonghyun here~ <3
he's the best!!

Chapter 1: OMG I can't stop crying. I had to go get tissues so many times to wipe my eyes and blow my nose (omg I can’t stop crying). I couldn’t read my eyes were so blurry w/ tears. I felt all of Taemin's pain with every word you wrote. My heart just hurts for him so much right now.
I am kind of glad in a way that Jjong didn’t end up with Taemin. Not because I’m a hardcore ontae shipper but it made it sadder. I mean that in a god way…it was very well written and just beautifully sad. I also think Tae would not have been truly happy with Jjong even if they did get together. He would always have Onew in the back of his mind.
I am happy he died with a smile...All happy that he was on his way to see Jinki …Taemin loved him sooo much. And him being buried right beside him… oh god I have to stop crying...
I don’t know how to explain it right now. I’m still all emotional. I’ve never cried so hard reading a fic before.

This story is so beautiful. I'm kind of glad Taemin didn't end up with Jonghyun because it just seemed like a false happiness would ensue. I really love it and I want to cry so bad right now! But...my sister is in the room. TT.TT

I didn't expect the turn of the events because what I was expecting was some cheating to happen. But anyway, this is really good. And I think that how you ended it was really perfect. I mean.. Even though I pity Jonghyun for never getting the chance to tell Taemin how he means to him.. It's just so realistic at some point. This is really sad.. And I'm now rendered speechless..

OMO, that was so unbelievably sad, i'm sobbing my heart out right now, it really feels like some ripped a whole in my chest, it hurts so much; that was amazingly written; poor Onew getting killed that close to coming home, and his forever with Taemin; i really hope that the bloody idiot that did it got shot too; it just makes it worse knowing that he died like that, by one of his own guys stupidity; i'm glad that Tae didn't end up with Jjong, I'd have hated that; as much as it kills me that Taemin died too, I like that he and Onew get to be together now, and on their wedding day too; poor Jjong having to be the one to find him, but at least Taemin was just in bed with a smile on his face, it shows he was happy with his choice, and that he went peacefully; and although it's hard now for Jjong, there's potential happy ending in sight or him, wonderful job, even if you did make me cry; it's really hard to type when you can hardly see, and can't think clearly; i'm gonna go finish sobbing my heart out, write more OnTae soon, something happy please, I beg you; ONTAE FOREVER.

Oh my god, your writing skills are awesome. You really made me cry ... onew died ... taemin died ... ( ; _______ ; ) akLBFIadNSMCWÖAW. I don't like character deaths because it hurts me so much, but your story was just written so beautiful and emotional. awesome. :')

Re-read this. I read it a while back but forgot to sub and comment. This fic is so awesome, and it makes me so emotional T_T *sobs*

Crying already, only half down the first chapter :(

I cried a million times at this.
This was one amazing AFF, it's like I felt what the characters felt. That was really amazing.
The part with key at the end finally made me smile. :]

I can't stop crying...omo so amazingly written