i wonder how long hakyeon must have been seeing taekwoon to finally get the courage (chance?) to meet him. or maybe he has been hearing from hongbin. i didn't know how to react when taekwoon first arrived at hakyeon's house. from the start of the description i've beginning to foresee the sadness.
i like the whole idea of this story. it's sad but in a happy way? yeah something like that. since you didn't mark this as completed, am i expecting a sequel or an epilogue? hahahaha. either way, i've enjoyed the whole read. just wish that taekwoon wouldn't do anything stupid.
thank you for sharing.

Chapter 1: Ah, this was an absolute joy to read! The concept is incredibly interesting, your writing was simple yet captivating, and the end just left a tinge of bitterness on my tongue - The sweetness has long melted to give way to the bite of bitterness, yet leaving a trail of longing in its wake. The entire story felt like it was written in similar form to Taekwoon's meeting with Hakyeon: fleeting, teasing, and surprisingly melancholic. Although each scene is described rather briefly, and their interactions are quite short, I find images from their meetings constantly returning to my mind's eye; drawing emotions that are a little too intense for me to feel from a fic like this. For that, have a tip of my hat, dear author! You truly deserved it! ;D

On another note, while I may not be the best person to collaborate with (I'd lost my writing spark years ago, and have never really gotten it back... And my writing style is stifling at best, overly long-winded and unnecessary on other days...), I would love to help with edits and whatever advice/comments I can give! ;D Feel free to drop me a PM if you don't mind the little help I can give!

Chapter 1: This is a very beautiful story. I was so moved by the ending! Thank you for sharing.

Chapter 1: T.T so sad! Hakyeon become a spirit!

omg this seems really interesting~ please update soon ~