The First and The Last

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Drabble about Kang Seungyoon & Nam Taehyun. 

Foreword

This is a drabble that I wrote without thinking about it, it was when i was trying to write chap seven of my fic. (Friendship&Relationship) :) 

I'm sorry for my grammar, some typos, and ofc my lack of english.  its my first time publishing something without a beta reader. (I'm really nervious because of that?

Also i wrote it as a gift to my beloved friend AJ. (its yours, my berry)

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Sonita #1
Chapter 1: Short but meaningful~^^ the first and the last❤❤❤ I feel like I'm reading one short sweet of movie clip
laviosa666 #2
Chapter 1: Omg!!!
Romantic kangnam..
My feels... thanks authornim.. this chapt is rly beautifu♡
gummybaer #3
Chapter 1: Ah unnie first of all im so so so sooo happy you publicize this piece of work :') I know ppl would love this story. Aaannnndddd the foreword !!! Ah im such an unworthy fellow and brat, sorry and thank you *hugs & kisses*

Ok this time i would to comment this properly. First despite of how short the story, the feeling is deep and subtle. The history between the two is well delivered. And the angst feeling is strong, well its from you. Even when you type a dot it will bring angst feeling lmao. Seungyoon fight with himself, runaway frm Taehyun, protecting himself from the continuation of pain. But ! Thanks God Taehyun chase him until the end and yeaahhh they end up together. I feel like watching (or reading) a short movie, everything is neat and beautiful.

Last thanks for your gift, i love & appreciate it a lot !!! And i'll wait another drabbles in here *cough* the watching together one *cough*. Thank a lot unnie im so happy :'D
sellyoon #4
Chapter 1: omgg so romantic <333 my kangnam feel can't handle it {}
viole261 #5
Chapter 1: oh myyyy...Eleee..this is so lovely... hugs u, kiss u for not telling us abt your new fic.. gosh i love when taehyun in needy..or yoon ?? aaackk both so lovely here.. i saw happy ending and its beautiful ...just face it your path together..love it Ele.. thank u..(i had bad feeling when i asked u abt i love u words between kangnam yesterday bc you didnt reply me /sad/ but voila !!! throw u pillow and hv a good nite rest ele..) mmmuuaahh ....
kokky92 #6
Chapter 1: woahh, Ele, this was so nice!! as usual you can always convey feels in your fic, making the reader feel everything the characters go through! it was short but it was lovely, i could feel the conflict and Seungyoon's pain and Taehyun's doubt ... their passion act was the proof he needed to see what he really wanted... and damn, he wanted Seungyoon! <3 the ending is perfect ;u; giving them happiness after all that regret and doubts and pain... <3
SongRachel #7
Chapter 1: Uh my feels *cry
I'm glad Kangnam were lover finally, kyaa
Thanks for posting
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