A Jinx in Time [ONESHOT]

Description

"A Jinx
in Time
Story by: RienRien
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Slight fantasy, angst, romance
Story type: Oneshot
Characters: Kim Jong In, Do Kyung Soo, Seo Young Ho(Jeno), Hwang Tae Yong
Quote: "The clock ticks, but his time repeats."

 
Jongin opened the window pane, extending his arms and looking through the street he has always looked on. A lot of things has changed. The jongin who once had an affair with numerous girls; The Jongin who was once a host of one of the popular bars, transformed into someone who just stays at his apartment and barely hangs out.

But it's not like it was his desire.

He held the bottom part of the window frame and looked down the apartment gate. Someone is going to occupy the room beside his unit, as what he has heard from the others. No, it's not like he cares or is excited about having a room mate. It's just that he wanted to see if it's a babe or not.

"Why do I even have to live when I can't kiss girls anymore?" He clicked his mouth and came back to his bed, throwing his body on it and stared blankly on his ceiling. Baekhyun, one of those he has fooled who's actually a witch, has cursed him that everytime he does a ual skinship with someone like torrid kissing and whatnots, the time will go back to where it has began: from the time he met that person. Someone might think it's much better and enjoyable. And at first, when Baekhyun said those, he just laughed at it. But when it actually happened, Jongin swore it got tiring that eversince then, he has lost his willingness to live and felt exhausted. What's worst, is that he usually can't escape from the scene and everything just repeats. And it felt worst as the days goes by.

Foreword

TRAILER MADE BY ME <3

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Bookworm01
#1
Chapter 1: Hi. I've read the story. This story was on my to-read list for a long time now (I think the day it came out?) but I only got around to reading it today. And oh my golly wow, your plot is amazing! ^^
Uhm... Just to tell you NICELY (*coughs* ohreally *coughs*), I had a few problems with how it was written (okay, please please PLEASE don't hate me).
First, the layout. I REALLY think it's simply beautiful (and it rocks) but I had a difficult time reading everything since I was only reading on my (small screen) tablet. It was a pain to have to keep scrolling right just to read the lines. But, please don't let my comment discourage you from making more. I truly think the layout is fantastic; it's just that it didn't fit my screen well enough. I'm guessing it was made for PCs and computers instead of tablets and phones? I wish it was mobile-friendly, though.
suhologram #2
Chapter 1: awww~ nice job author nim! :)