Winter's Star

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Prologue

            The quietness and the darkness were dominating over a small town during a hard winter. The city was also known for its old mine in the mountains and its amazing railway, once usable, that surrounded the town. The high mountains were protecting the city in the valley from bad spirits. That was what every inhabitant believed. But maybe that “bad spirits” were already there. He surely was.

            Some foot prints in the snow were creating an alley to a railway where a girl was waiting. It was not the first, not the second, not even the tenth time when he saw her but he was looking at her strangely, no wonder, because he loved her from the bottom of his heart. Maybe that was the reason why he didn’t take her life yet.

Foreword

Hello guys,

This is a new one-shot made by MissStranger.

It's a Christmas gift for you.

Hope you like it and if you did then please upvote, and comment.

Merry Christmas you!

Love you. ^.^

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simplyblue_ #1
Chapter 2: This story was ethereal. Its so beautiful. The way you describe this story is so beautiful ;_; tho at first i cant grasp this story well with my limited brain capacity, but at least now i do~~ thank you for writing this ;v; keep on writting beautiful stories such as this in the future~ have a good dayyyyyy
Bookworm01 #2
Chapter 2: Well, it took me a few times to understand the story but I finally did. Wow. It's beautiful. I feel so sorry for V. Sorry, V. Please find comfort in her lifeless body. (LOL. What?) But seriously. Move on. I know you're having a tough time because you love her so much but that is not enough reason to give up on continuing to take lives. (Again, what?)
I don't know what to feel about the ending. It's just...sad. :-( (But it's kinda the girl's fault for not listening to V, I think.)
I wish the story was a bit longer. I couldn't have understood the story had I not reread it for way too many times. With more description, I think I could've understood it at once (like, for example, narrating how Taehyung was a bad spirit—basically show him taking a life so we could understand that he was a bad spirit then show him finding the girl in the mountains). I'm sorry if I'm insulting you. I didn't mean to. I was just- TT^TT Please don't get mad at me.
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Anyway, good job! Thanks for sharing! I appreciate it. :-)
kudofralaxy #3
Chapter 2: Im sorry but can you explain this story to me again ? I'm a little confused :)
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