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luxuria: taken gula: 0 avaritia: 0 ira: 2    acedia: 1 invidia: 2 superbia: 0

Koizumi Keiko (kei)

luxuria chommi leo tiffany

dereve eveCHOSEN

meet my character, I'll make the example asap!! ^^

p.s click the picture for the application : AUTHOR

Song Yujin (Belphegor)

acedia park taejun choa suga

aeonedition aeon ACCEPTED

hello aeon! first thing first, the tittle of your application is wrong, it should be like the one on the turn-in blog post. And I see that some guide lines there, if you don't have nicknames, delete the guide lines and put n/a or '-'. and also you forgot to put your character's birthplace. i like his personality. he seems like a very cold person. but the way he show his caring side is just different from most people. i like his persona too and the reason behind it. You forgot to change jungkook and v's pictures to your love interest's pictures, please change it. i guess that's all. your character's still pending until you change the issues. good luck! ^^ : AUTHOR

nam soowon (soo)

ira jung moa b-bomb yerin (15&)

koli-song ko-so ACCEPTED

i love you for using jung moa as the face claim, i only know her now, really. and she seems cute, too bad there aren't many pictures of her. i think i should look for more. i love how she dyed her hair black in the first half of the year and then went blond on the second half. the detailed personality part, love it. and WINNER ouo i don't find APINK cute either but yeah. i like her background though i'm a fan of taeyeon but i can't blame you for making her like that, it's up to you anyway. just b-bomb omg i really like the love story part he's indeed cute ;3; no mistakes just typo here and there (can't help it, i'm an ocd okay i'm sorry -u-) yes, good luck!! ^^ : AUTHOR

cao linh thi (Lindsey)

ira eugenie grey seungri j.fla

echoechoecho freja ACCEPTED

first thing first omg omg ASGHKH i know eugenie grey omg she's so beautiful im crying. the tattos part, i remember when one of my friend said that sistar's hyorin has a tattoo below her navel and she had to cover it everytime they had a music show if their clothes showed their navel-- it was sad though. The personality's fine, though the second paragraph seems not done? your talent twin, i don't know hwo j.fla is, really, but i checked some of her videos, because of you of course, and she's pretty good. and seungri i'm a huge big bang fan, i'm a vip yes and i like how you capture his personality which is so like him. and no, i have zero problem with linh being a bi, it can make the story intersting yes. no mistakes though you have typo here and there haha cause again, i'm an ocd so i spot typo easily. good luck! ^^ : AUTHOR

im jangmi

invidia gam dain taemin seulgi

primrose0930 jess ACCEPTED

hello jess! i personally like gam dain. i love how you relate her personality to the plotline you chose for her, gold point on that hehe and i teared up a bit on her background because i'm a one heck of a sensitive girl sobs and again, the reason behind your fanclub name how you relate it to the plotline. no mistakes, just a few typo hehe good luck! ^^ : AUTHOR

Yoo Ari

invidia kim seukhye jonghyun (shinee) kasper/minah

darkie999 serine ACCEPTED

first thing first, i saw some part missing on your application. though i envy you for finishing it in two hours. basocally no mistakes except for the missing part of the application. fix that and you're ready to go ^^ : AUTHOR

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Plotline Ulzzang Love Interest Talent Twin

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chanseowoon
#1
Chapter 3: is allowed?
Primrose0930
#2
Chapter 4: I'm glad you liked JangMi! I can go back and fix the spelling mistakes and the talent twin if you'd like?
Soonyangel
#3
Hey~ I have a question, because it's not written in the cheatsheet, I wondered if our characters had to have a love interest of the opposite or if they could have /yuri relationship? I guess no, but I still wanted to ask ^^