Lost

Description

It just an idea I write it so quikly because I have some work to do and I couldn't do my work unless I write this one

I hope you all enjoy

sorry for the mistake

Foreword

And now eunhyuk knew that he lost a dear friend, someone that once loved him more than himself.

He lost his heart.

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sayeunhae
#1
Chapter 2: Was that the end ;-; oh my feels! But thank you for making this story, I love it :)
ChirleySun
#2
Chapter 2: Hello there ! ^__^
First, I want to say "thank you", so Thank You for the sequel. I'm glad that you wrote it with some of my ideas.
I don't know if I'm mean but I'm happy that Hyuk suffered here... And Hae, ah Hae is happy now and I just think that everything is well deserved. Sometimes, people need a lesson and I think here, Hae & Hyuk had each other their lesson. Well, it was great, great and great. Thank you again ! (:
ChirleySun
#3
Chapter 1: Hello there (:
Your story is great and pretty sad. So much feelings !
I was in total anger when hyukjae hurted Donghae that much. My heart was broken when Donghae manage to defend Hyuk even if he hurts him. I was confused when Donghae still smile and help Hyuk to have this f*** girl. But at the end, when Donghae talked with Hyuk, I was crying because it's true, if really Hyuk saw him as a brother, he'll never hurt him for a stupid girl. The moment where Donghae broke completely my heart was when he said with that smile of his, they are just "friend", not best friend, just a f** friend, someone who you can a stranger, someone you can hurt just for useless things, someone who you can live without. And I think, at this moment, Hyuk was broken.
I love your story because at this end, Hyuk doesn't have a good happy ending, but Hae has one, becoming free from this one-side love.

It'll be good to have a sequel. Not a happy one, like your ending, because Hyuk don't deserves it in this story. But one where we can see Hae build a new love in front of him. Build a new "best friend" relationship in front of him. And Hyuk will realize that the real person that he needed, in a love way or just friend way, was Hae. It'll be a good lesson to him.

Well, thanks for your story and I hope you'll write again a new one (:
Hwaiting if you have writing project !