So, it was more of a poem. Was that it? If so, I wished you elaborated on how I actually love Luhan, (because in reality, he's just a famous stranger who I may or may not truly know much about) and how baozi (aka XIUMIN—and correction: MY Baozi but *coughs* fine, he's Luhan's *coughs*) loves him more. I don't mean to discourage you or anything. I'm simply stating my opinion, which, hopefully, doesn't hurt your feelings at all.