TWINING

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The creases of his palm were sloppy as he stared into oblivion. But what is there to look at? When oblivion was nothing but darkness and hollow breaths. He doubts it even is a place. It was more like deep threads of pain and longing. Of regrets and maybe specks of uncertainties. Or maybe it’s just nothing. His eyes shifted when he felt another breath. He did not utter a word though. He kept tapping his right thumb. It might be a habit or it could mean something. He’s not so sure himself. He felt breaths again. This time he turned around.

But no one was there.

He closed his eyes. Not wanting to feel the eerie silence once again. It was unbearable. suffocating. Almost a punishment. He threaded his eyes open and silently stood up. He treaded down the hollow space on his room, biting his lower lip, trying to comprehend the aching muscles on his back or the fading bruises on his hands.

He stopped walking. Truth gnawing upon him. He was Lee Seunghoon and he might have committed multiple murders.

Foreword

a WINNER fanfic.

 

WHEN LIVES GET TANGLED, IT OFFERS COMPLICATIONS.

 

THEIR LIVES WERE TWINING AND THEIR LIVES WERE LOSING.

 

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fic_reader
#1
Chapter 7: OHHH MYYY GODDDDDDD..... YOU KNOW THAT YOUR STORY ARE JUST TOO ING PERFECT? I... I DON'T KNOW HOW I CAN EXPLAIN MY FEELINGS... I JUST.....
COULD YOU PKEASE UPDATE? SHALL I WAIT FOR YOUR UPDATE?
Nats21 #2
Chapter 7: Oh my God i just found this fic and couldn't help my self just keep reding the whole chapters, I love it thank you so much I'm your new fan , you are amazing just please keep updating, I wat to know what happend please I promise to be patient.Pd. Sorry for my bad english but i'm from México
NakaharaAi #3
Chapter 7: Arghhhhhhhh!!!!!!
Who is that? 1996? What is thaaaat?
I am not ready for this!!!!!
(But thanks for comeback ;) )
KPVIP26
#4
Chapter 7: u killed my Song Hamster???!!!!!!!!!! authornim WHYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!?????????? T_T T_T
ceciyo #5
Chapter 7: Chapter 7: oh Lord God... I have to wait for 8 months just to read that someone's dead (no spoiler ahaha)... Authornim.. why did u do this to me?? TT_________TT
But thank you so so so much for updating..
Somehow i feel that it has connection with Seunghoon past but Jinwoo is soo suspicious..
Arrgghhh.. i dont know...
Please update sooner.. i'm dying of curiousness.. lol..
I hate u but i love u authornim... <333
saturnical
#6
Chapter 6: Yo. so here is the "long comment" im gonna put in AFF

(behold. here are my feels)

Well, i'm gonna list it down bc this fic is gOLDEN

-the description is PERFECT; it hit the spot of the perfect synopsis for a mystery fic and i love it i love it i love it. I love the way it was about murders bc death is my guilty pleasure (oops)

-the first chapter was beautiful!!!!! it portrayed Seunghoon's underlying anxiety and the truth that haunts him from time to time; and God, this fic gave me the chills. The way you wrote the mystery part was not confusing, (and that's the best thank you so much) but the essence was there!

-as i progressed, your pacing is just right!!!!!! not too fast, and not too slow; it does not give away easily, and there are subtle ideas that you can pick up along the way. it's so ing beautiful.

-okay holy ; WHAT IS WITH JINWOO??!??!! he's so suspicious and im literally side-eyeing him the whole time i was reading this fic but, jeez, he's a sweetheart and he wouldn't do something to hurt his dongsaengs, right? RIGHT?!!!??! aAAaah. I don't even know anymore, I don't even trust my favorite son :( or even Seunghoon. AgH. I don't even trust you, author :----( why are you making me feel so ????????? idk?????? ahhh . Your fic is golden.

- Seunghoon's habit with his thumb was explained! Holy !! My lowkey Jinhoon stan is crying :---(

-HOLY IS THIS SAW OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT?! IS THIS ALL A GAME?! OH GOD WHAT IF IT WAS YG ALL ALONG?!?! oh god i dont know anymore.

-okay please dont kill seunghoon in the end or else i will cry and set myself on fire



AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH please please please please update! I have to know everything! AND I WILL GLADLY VOLUNTEER AS YOUR BETA READER BC IM THIRSTY FOR THIS FIC.

Ah. I love you. Continue writing such beautiful things. Continue slaying. I will look forward to your other works! <3


(sorry if i cursed a lot, this is my natural habitat ily!)
MMMOOx #7
Chapter 6: omg am I ready enough to read this chapter???
ceciyo #8
Chapter 6: i just found this ff.. OMG.. I'm speechless.. I can't think properly.. ouuchh.. pls update soon author-nim.

I'm dying of curiosity... Save me pleaseeeeeeee
kwuintessence
#9
Chapter 6: Waah! *ugly sobbing* I can't get enough of it! Aigoo~ My JinHoon feels. ❤❤❤ Looking forward to your next update. The suspense is killing me! Thanks again, Kendo-chii✨