My New Drummer

Description

Amber Liu (AJ)

22 years old

Ex-boyfriend of F(x)member Krystal Jung

A dork

Lives his life like there is no tomorrow

A Drummer and Guitarist

 

Krystal Jung

20 years old

Ex-girlfriend of Amber Liu

A member of f(x) kpop girl group

Looks cold from outside but sweet inside

 

A/N: hi everyone this is my very first fic so be nice to me hehe and hope you will like it

im not good with the forewrods and stuff so why dont you read it instead

im also sorry for the grammar mistakes and the misspelling

hope you will like it and dont forget to comment i would like to know your thoughts!!

 

btw i was ispired by a fanfic called  http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/837561/the-drummer-guy-kryber

 

 
 
 
 

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lovesehun #1
Chapter 2: UPDATE PLEASE :(
_pinocchio_ #2
Chapter 2: HANA WHAT THE HECK?! UPDATE PLEASE IM GONNA CRY IF YOU WONT... i will haunt you down like seriously--- love you xD
nathalieshinpark #3
Chapter 2: yeah ,update soon please:")
PinkMonsterHwang #4
Chapter 2: Update pls
sandy16
#5
Chapter 1: I like the story, I thought it was pretty good^^
PoisonousLake
#6
This is a great story, you should make it longer. I. Et this going to be more interesting than The Drummer Guy
Bookworm01
#7
Well, despite the grammatical and typographical errors that I decided to overlook, this is a really enjoyable story. Just one thing, though: I know they kissed with a white curtain between them, so how did the kiss feel? I think the kiss would at least taste or feel more like the cloth, than their lips. Just thinking about it makes me shudder, but in a good way. It's romantic and all, but I think it progressed a little bit fast on that part. I really thought that Krystal wasn't the kind of girl (in this story) who kissed just anyone (maybe she won't respond at all and just stand there, with her eyes wide open). At least, I wanted Amber/AJ to blow her a flying kiss instead, especially with that playful personality of his. Anyway, that's just my opinion, and your idea is still great, whether or not you hear mine. It was just a bit sudden and unexpected that AJ would kiss her, even if he was her ex.
As for a sequel, well, I think... Maybe? I'm a bit interested on how AJ will make her pay, if he would really do that. Does he really love her, or not? Because I think, he still harbors feelings for her, and this is just his way of getting closer to her. As he is part of the band, and the only boy at that (aside from the manager), there will be a lot of obstacles, but in the end, they'll probably end up together. I'd really like AJ to lose his cool, if you ever decide to make a sequel, and probably destroy his (aka the company's) drum set because he had a "fight" with Krystal. More or less something like that.
Also, if you write a sequel, please (PLEASE) add flashbacks, so I can know their past. The past of each character makes them who they are, and if you explain that in the sequel, which will hopefully be a bit longer, I don't know... I think my questions will be answered?
Sorry for rambling. I just wanted to comment on your story. ;-) Thanks!
bep510 #8
Chapter 1: Ooohhhhhh this is really interesting and good. I loved the story the drummer guy, but this is a cool spin to it. I want to know more.
slho901
#9
Chapter 1: This is interesting...
foneall #10
Chapter 1: Is this complete ???
I Think you should make another sequel for this...Author..
Because this is gonna be interested....*wink* :D