Kim Han Bin and Lee Ha Yi

Description

This is my first time writing a fanfic, I'm not usually a shipper but these two are just so cute >.< 

seriously, I barely read fanfics at all so i'm sorry if there's an unwritten rule in fanfic writing or among the fanfic community that i don't know. i'm a complete newbie, really.

feel free to critique me in the comment section, really, i will appreciate it so much. i really want to improve my writing. 

please forgive me if there's any grammar mistakes since english is not my first language, hehe

hope you guys will like it :D

 

Foreword

I want to write this fanfic like a fanfic version of what happens in real life between Hanbin and Hayi. I should've written the earlier stories (mix and match collaboration, going shopping together, how they met, etc.) first but because i felt like the timing is right, i want to publish this first. haha. 

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KonnichiwaAnnyeong #1
Chapter 1: It seems so real author-nim. Ppalli and update juseyo! ♡
RebBlack7 #2
Chapter 1: Update please??
fafajung #3
Chapter 1: Wow your story related to bi situation. It like real story. So epic!
suburbia #4
Chapter 1: First time? You're great! Your writing style is clean and easy to follow as a reader! You also don't over-use Korean words, that's good. A small tip: Try not to begin a lot of sentences after each other with 'I' and describe the environment to make the story line seem a bit deeper (these are two things I struggle with a lot haha). But seriously, you're good! Keep your work up ♡
Queenchae #5
Chapter 1: Ouh this is so cute ^.^
and tbh this situation make me sad T.T
looking a lot people judge hanbin just because his father scandal and hey that is not his fault anyway ;-(
em by the way please update the next chapter soon ^.^
i'm waiting :-D
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