Minho's Thoughts 4

Blueberry Stars

 

 

Today it was raining, and it was supposed to go on all weekend.  So, early that morning Minho decided nothing made the rain better than a warm fritter.  He made several batches hoping that it would be popular and he wanted to have enough to last until 4pm.  He baked them in little ceramic bowls and garnished them with a dark chocolate drizzle.  They looked comforting and delicious.  The store was packed from open to well after noon and Minho watched each little tray slowly disappear out of the case.  Around 2pm they were almost all gone much to the owners delight. But a certain knot of nervousness settled in Minho’s stomach.  With out anyone noticing Minho snuck one of the last fritters out of the warm case and nestled in the back of the warm oven for safe keeping. 

 

4pm came and went, but the boy didn’t come in. The rain continued to pound away outside and it eventually became so bad people stopped coming in.  The sky was dark like it was night and Minho felt uneasy.

 

“Guess the rain was enough to even scare away some of our regulars today,” Amber was chatting with an elderly woman who had commented on her surprise on seeing the shop so empty. 

 

“I guess your right, the news is saying that it’s been dangerous, some of the busses have run off the roads.”

 

Minho felt his stomach drop and a sudden coldness settle in his chest.  He ignored the rest of their conversation and went home early that night. 

 

 

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Shinee2020 #1
Chapter 19: A few years later and still so cute! :)
myseonflower
#2
Chapter 19: Love it ❤️
Shinee2020 #3
Chapter 19: Wow....love it! :)
MrsLeeTaemin
#4
Chapter 18: THIS IS TOO CUTE STOP IT.
DKey2Happiness #5
Chapter 19: So so cute!!!!! Will there be a sequel?? I need more of this fluffiness in my life!! <3
pinky_jinki
#6
Chapter 19: Lsjfkekddj ;----;♡
Sooo beautiful, I freaking loved it ;-;♡
Sosooo cute, they both were so cute ;u;
Ahhhh these type of stories always makes me happy
(Everything related with 2min makes me happy xd)
Layni17
#7
Chapter 19: SEQUEL I AM BEGGING YOU PLEASE DEAR LOVE THERE IS SO MUCH POTENTIAL AND THIS IS ALREADY ONE OF MY FAVORITE 2MIN FICS DESPITE THE SIMPLICITY BUT IT WAS GORGEOUS AND CUUUUUUTE COFFEESHOP!AUS ARE AMAZING!
Calming down now, I do have a single critique that stood out:
I know I'm a fast reader, but I read this whole fic in FIFTEEN minutes. It may be your style, or you maybe you struggle making long chapters. I can get the blog chapters ((Which, by the way, were probably my favorite thing about this)) being short, but...I dunno, I wish it had a bit more depth to it, though I did enjoy the simple plotline. It's rare to find such simple fluff with more than five chapters, so I commend you for being able to carry on for that many chapters.
Besides that I am throughly pleased with "Blueberry Stars." Which is, by the way, my favorite title, like, ever.
Good job, I'll definitely read more of your works!
Sparklecupcake252 #8
Chapter 19: That was so cute!!!
shinee02
#9
Chapter 19: Soooo fluffy~
This fic you have here gives me happy feelings, author-nim. The pictures from Taemin's personal blog make the story unique, and I like it very much. Thanks for this. <3
Bored0ut0fHerMind
#10
Such a sweet ending! Leaves me wanting for more though. Any chance of an epilogue or sequel? :)