A Beautiful Chaos

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Rubric
01 / Title+Foreword+Description= 10/10- its well described and i like how the title came in handy at the end, "a beautiful chaos"
02 / Plot and Originality= 40/40- i think that the plot was well thought, it was well understood!
03 / Characters= 15/15-okai, so imma be honest with ya, im a idolxoc reader most of the time, and i liked this not because of that but because it was very descriptive in words, talking about who they were, how they acter, what they thought, and you used blue to tell who the characters were (in the description).
04 / Layout= 15/15- neat, emphasis added when needed, title of chapter is shown, i like it.
05 / Pictures/ posters 15/15- okay, so this part usually varies by the graphic designer, but it also varies which graphic designer you chose, and Neon Graphics is one of my faves tbh.
06 / Extra Notes= 5/5- i like to read got7 (sometimes) and i really liked this one especially! /thumbs up/

 

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taemeilin_
#1
Would you like to be affiliates? ^^
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/629670/
Nictaeny9
#2
Chapter 6: Wow, thanks so much for the effort alr put it! I'll look forward to the review
FlyingMay
#3
Chapter 5: Thank you so much the review <3
hotaznspice #4
01 / Username+Username Link
hotaznspice + https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/579011

02 / Fic Title
Integrity & Borders

03 / Fic Link
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/677531/integrity-borders-drama-siwon-exo-chen-kris-suho

04 / Genre(S)(include /rated m if it is!)
drama; romance; rated M for moderate and mild language

05 / Character(s)
OC (Joohyun), Suho, Kris, Chen, Siwon, Krystal, Amber, EXO

06 / Main Pairing(s), if applicable
Joohyun + Suho,/Kris, Chen + Krystal

07 / Which Reviewer would you like?
Anyone ^^

08 / Beta Reading?
Nope

09 / Password
Nichkhun + Tiffany
FlyingMay
#5
01 / Username+Username Link
FlyingMay + http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/500749
02 / Fic Title: A Beautiful Chaos
03 / Fic Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/796783/a-beautiful-chaos-comedy-jinyoung-romance-jackson-mark-got7
04 / Genre(S)(include /rated m if it is!) Romance and Comedy
05 / Character(s) OC(s), Mark, Jinyoung, and Jackson
06 / Main Pairing(s), if applicable: Mark+ Ella, Jackson + Sumin, Jinyoung+Aerin
07 / Which Reviewer would you like? Any one of you is okay.
08 / Beta Reading? Nope
09 / Password: Baekyeon
Nictaeny9
#7
01 / Username+Username Link
Nictaeny9
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/488617

02 / Fic Title

Dark Ties

03 / Fic Link
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/543164/dark-ties-jessica-romance-snsd-taeny-taeyeon-tiffany-yuri

04 / Genre(S)(include /rated m if it is!)
Yuri
Drama
Action
Romance

05 / Character(s)
Taeyeon and Tiffany

06 / Main Pairing(s), if applicable
Taeny

07 / Which Reviewer would you like?
Anyone

08 / Beta Reading?
Nope

09 / Password
Otp: Taeny lolz

Note/ Thank you for requesting, fill out all forms correctly, and comment the form in the Shop comment box!
jeonnamjoo
#8
Chapter 2: Review Form
01 / Username+Username Link
AshleyFang
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/573813
02 / Fic Title
The Prize
03 / Fic Link
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/807708/the-prize-angst-mpreg-luhan-suho-suhan-krisho-suyeol
04 / Genre(S)
mpreg angst romance
05 / Character(s)
Kim Joonmyeon, Luhan, Kris Wu, Park Chanyeol
06 / Main Pairing(s), if applicable
Kim Joonmyeon + Luhan
07 / About How Long is the Fic?
Chaptered + On-going
08 / Any specific chapter to read?
No~
09 / Password
OTP : Baekhyun and Taeyeon
Note/ Thanks a lot. I hope this will improve my writing!~
Misskittyrose
#9
Username + Link:

Topneru - http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/326062

Fic Title: Hell Wants An Angel

Fic Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/793048

Genre: / drama / supernatural / romance and more

Character(s): EXO + BTS + FX

About How Long is the Fic? : TO BE HONEST I WANT MY DREAM TO COME TRUE AND THAT'S TO BE ON THE FRONT PAGE AS A GOOD WRITER SO FOR NOW I DON'T SEE AN ENDING.

Any specific chapter to read? : NOP

Password: OTP : Nickhyun & Tiffany

Please help me become a better writer, I want my dreams and my fanfics to be on the front page. I gave up on my dream and I need motivation and help with my writing since English isn't my first language. Thank You!