His Sunshine and Punishment

Description

Jinyoung nearly ruined the Shindeul couple by cheating with Shinwoo, but gets pregnant with Shinwoo's child because (he decides) it's his punishment. To keep it a secret he leaves the band raises his small son Shin Su Min away from the others till Shinwoo finds him and becomes the father Jinyoung could never be. Rather than falling in love agin- Jinyoung learns to let Su Min's father be apart of his life again.

Foreword

Rather than his being a mature story- I would like to call it a story just becaus the topic is a little strange.

I'm not making a sappy love story about falling in love, this is a story about Jinyoung maturing and letting Shinwoo be apart of his son's life. Kind of like a slice of life fic? This story takes place before 'I Still See You/ I have No Right' but after'Who is She?'. It's actually taking place directly after 'Skinship'.

I don't really understand links- but I'm writing this for this ( http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/803783 ) contest. It's RedGuitarist's contest.

Please give me the good feedbacks~

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becharlatan #1
Chapter 9: This has got to be the best slice of life fic that doesn't speak of fkcu so much. I kove this.
I love how Jinyoung tried and proved to himself that he's a grown man now. I utterly love this. This is gold. This is beautiful. Great job!
carmie96 #2
Chapter 9: I am sorry for this late comment!

I am not going to lie I am feeling teary especially when you described what a family is. That was beautiful ~ this was a good story I really am going to miss it
carmie96 #3
Chapter 8: Oh god what in the world just happened here......
carmie96 #4
Chapter 7: Oh my.... I am so happy the baby is good but what are they up to? This is not going to turn out good. Just please don't let Sumin be taken away from Jinyoungie.
Hitomie #5
Chapter 7: wahhh faking Sandeuls pregnancy o_O wouldn´t Shinwoo be even more mad at JY as he is right now if he find out the truth?? omo I fee so sad for Jinyoung :( having the fear to lose his child and be hated by kinda all around him T__T poor Jinny :( give this poor guy some love too (not only from his son XD) :D
carmie96 #6
Chapter 6: I have just noticed I have not commented....
So hi there! I truly feel bad for Jinyoung and Deullie. Shinwoo I am not sure. I have like mixed feelings about him. I remember when he accused Jinyoung of being crazy I got so mad at him! That was just low. *sigh* I just hope that Jinyoung doesn't lose his baby.
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