Say Yes

Saying I Love You with a Good bye
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Way back May 18, 2011

 

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Re Hyel took a deep breath as she stared at the tremendous roller coaster ride, standing in line with her friend, she badly wanted to back out. But consequence are consequence, she hated the fact that her friend, Luhan - whom she secretly love, beat her at the math test. Which make her a loser and she had to ride the roller coaster with him as a consequence.

She bit her lip unconsciously, trying to calm her heart. "Hey." She heard from behind and turned around. She looked at him with pleading eyes. "Its just a ride, you'll be safe." Luhan cooed, at some point he wanted to just let this go because she seems so agitated, but he needed to fulfill his plan. He throw his arm around her shoulder to keep her closer, if that was even possible.

The roller coaster came to an end, passengers leaving with happy faces, or sort of. Hyel wanted to run away, she was already next in line. "Lu, can... I pass?" She asked him. But luhan was stubborn, he shook his head and pushed her gently towards the entrance. 

Hyel keep on fidgeting on her seat, Luhan on her side, as the crew close the railings for security one by one, Luhan suddenly run away before the crew can even close it, leaving Hyel shocked. "What the.." She looked at the retreating figure of Luhan. " Hmm. Sir. I want to back out, can you pleas-"

"In five, four, three, two.... One" Then boom the coaster started moving. First it was just a smooth ups and downs, then comes the turns and loops, twisting in a way. She was panting badly, she hated Luhan for ditching her like this. "Luhan you jerk, you're such a coward

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HyungChanyeol
so I've decided to update and finish this with 10 chapters, maybe.

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blanderina
#1
Chapter 6: If it wasn't for your singing, I wouldn't have commented XD
Anywaaaaay, ARE U FRICKIN DONE NOW?!? JUST END IT THERE PLS ;-;
blanderina
#2
Chapter 5: "Kisses? Hmmm. You wouldn't really know." DAMMIT!!! WHY??!?!?!?!?! I'M GONNA STOP COMMENTING FOR NOW XD
blanderina
#3
Chapter 4: You're making me feel a lot worse.. like seriously? XD Do you have to write down all those stuff? THOSE HAPPY TIMES WHEN THEY WERE STILL TOGETHER!??!!?!?!? I CANNUT. ;----;
Blackjack27 #4
Chapter 4: I need more I need to see luhan regretting to marry the girl...not that I dont like her I just see that luhan and rehyel would be really cute if they married!!
Blackjack27 #5
Chapter 3: OMG I love it so much author nim!! Please make it into a fanfic!!
blanderina
#6
As much as I didn't like the ending (bc it makes me all sad and irritated and like "WHY DOES LOVE HAVE TO BE THIS WAY LYK THEIR LOVES WAS PERF BUT WHY?!?!??!?!"), the story was beautiful and written well. :) I like stories that can like happen in real life. It shows the reality of things that not everything ends well or lasts forever. even if their relationship was like fairytale. Anyways, this doesn't really need a sequel (although a part of me wants one XD lol).. all in all this story is a 10. Haha
Blackjack27 #7
Chapter 2: I love this OMG I cried T^T oh author nim can you tell luhan point of view or something I want them to stay together!! Pls author nim anythinf!
bapexorules #8
omg this is such a good story, can u write a sequel where luhan regrets? pleeeaaasseeee!