Chapter 9: I love it, fantastic job, I'm so so glad that Taemin loves Onew; I don't know why Minho is acting the way he is, it's not like him and Taemin ever dated, he asked him on a date, he said he'd think about it then said no, end of; OnTae are really really adorable and cute with each other as always;
The only thing I gotta say is that you keep mixing up the use of hyung; Onew is the oldest so ALL the others are his dongsaeng's, but he can just call them by their name; they'd all call Onew hyung but he doesn't call them that; then it's Jonghyun, so they'd all (but Onew) call Jonghyun hyung; then Key, so only Minho and Taemin call him hyung; then it's Minho, so only Taemin calls him hyung; no one calls Taemin hyung coz he's the youngest, the maknae;
I'm sure that you know the order of their ages, but I just wanted to go through it and explain it properly, I hope it helps.
“Ah! Two days too long!” “Quickly! To the chicken mobile!” These lines got me laughing so much lol~ it's so adorbs YOUR STORY IS JUST THE CUTEST THING EVARRR
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