Part I..Searching for Gui Gui

My Sweet Annoying Ghost

 

 

The sky was staring to get dark and rain drops are falling from the sky but they still don't know where to find Gui Gui.
 
"Aaron this is your fault! You should not let her go back in the bus alone" Calvin pointed Aaron.
 
"It's not my fault Calvin, I don't know that this is going to happened okay?" Aaron said defending himself.
 
"Can you guy's stop arguing, we should do something okay!" Yatou stopped them.
 
"Why don't we seperate and find Gui Gui?" Xiao Gui suggested.
 
"Xiao Gui and Yatou was right, let's have pairing" Jiro agreed to Xiao Gui and start pairing. "Xiao Gui and Yatou you look in that area, Chun and Calvin in that part
and Aaron and me will look for Gui Gui in that part. Okay guys lets go" they were about to go but Ms.Cherry stopped them.
 
"Where are you going? stay here and let the rescuer do this job, you might get lost in the forest like Gui Gui so just stay here" 
 
"But Ms.Cherry-" Yatou didn't finished her words because Ms.Cherry cut it off.
 
"Don't worry they will find Gui Gui" Ms.Cherry said and hug Yatou and go back to the other student.
 
"Sorry Ms. Cherry but we have to find Gui Gui" Yatou whisphered.
 
They didn't listen to what have Ms.Cherry said, instead they still continued to find Gui Gui. It's really raining so hard now but they do not care wether they are wet, the only important for them is to find Gui Gui.
 
"I'm scared, Aaron please look for me" Gui Gui start to cried again. "Please someone help me". She's shivering because of the rain she can feel that anytime now she will fainted sp she sat on the root of the big tree to take a rest for a moment, she's very tired.
 
"Gui Gui... Gui Gui" Aaron shouted.
"Gui Gui..... Gui Gui...." Jiro shouted.
"Gui Gui... Gui Gui... Gui Gui!" you can hear them shouting.
 
"Aaron?" GUi Gui heard Aaron's voice. "Aaron I'm here! aaron!" She started to yelled and stood up with excitement but Gui Gui accidentally step on the root of three and fell down on the ground. When she tried to stand up she can't, she got sprain on her right ankle. Gui start to cry again especially when she saw the boar, and she knows that when she move the boar will attack her.
 
"Aaron! Aaron I'm here" she yelled again. She was afraid. " Aaron!...Aaron!.."
 
"Jiro I heard Gui Gui's voice" Aaron said.
"Where? I can't here anything Except the rain" Jiro said and start calling Gui Gui's name again. "Gui Gui..! Gui Gui..! where are you?"
 
Gui Gui heard Jiro's voiceso she yelled again.
"Jiro, Aaron Im here." She starts to throw  stone to the boar to scare it away but it didn't help, instead the boar ran to attack her.
 
"aaahhhhh,........ Aarooooon!" Gui Gui screamed.
 
 
Ohhh noooo... what is going to happen to Gui Gui,
does her friends will save her on time or it will be too late for them..?
 
sorry for a short chapter.. 
please comment...:)
 
 

 

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back to re-read guilun old goodie^^
lylasoyu
#3
Chapter 40: Like it...so sweet
jeanne007 #4
nice story :))
i like it.
keep a good work :)
sackjt
#5
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!
GUILAN 4EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-HaeFany-Forever- #6
Like!!! :D<br />
Great story! Had a really nice time reading it! Thanks!
jiejie #7
Oh no!<br />
It's already finished!<br />
But thank goodness it is a happy ending! Yappee! haha!<br />
<br />
Yay! Calvin and hebe together!<br />
They deserve each other.<br />
now, i know that Calvin is in the right hands!<br />
<br />
Too glad that Calvin's plan succeeded! <br />
He was such a genius!<br />
<br />
As for Serena, I don't have anything to say to her. <br />
<br />
And for GuiLun, they are happy now!<br />
hmmm, maybe you can post a new chapter, i mean, a sequel where they had reunion and they already have family? hehe<br />
<br />
And, really? You will have a new story? Yappee!<br />
I will wait for it! <br />
Tell me when you will post it so I can subscribe and comment!<br />
<br />
gudluck for the new fic!<br />
and congratulations for finishing this story!<br />
n_n<br />
--fengus
#8
It's finished!!<br />
You know, this is one of the first times I have ever finished reading a really long fan fic!! <br />
Hu, now I think i'm going to start missing it!!<br />
Hooray my name was mentioned!! <br />
No, no, no! Thank YOU for writing this fan fiction!! It was really good!!<br />
Alright, I'm going to read It Started WIth A Kiss now!
dramaddict
#9
Why didn't i find out it was finished sooner? I will miss your fan fiction, but I look forward to "it started with a kiss" GuiLun ♥ always and forever ~<br />
keep it up :)
SakuraMikan12 #10
Wow!!<br />
I'm sorry for the late comment, our internet was down, and it was so depressing..<br />
I just decided and thought through 2 things when I had all the free time since we didn't have internet.<br />
1. I love ur story and Guilun so much<br />
1. I can't live without GuiLun and Internet!!