Chapter 1: Started screaming the moment Junmyeon became suspicious. BECAUSE I KNEW, NO, I FELT LUHAN'S CHARA BEING HE IS AND DAMN THE DOWNWARD SPIRAL JD MUST GO THROUGH.

Thank you for this! <3

Chapter 1: I was so not seeing that coming! This fic is great, nicely written. Good job!! :)

Chapter 1: Omo that ending :O that was so unexpected! But it was really great! Loved it.

Chapter 1: Awwwww Jongdae T^T Don't worry, Joonmyun is here for you~~ I love psychological stories like this. And I also love that in the end it was SuChen kekeke >.<

Amazing! All the pieces didn't click into place until just past the halfway point. The moment the click happened, I was like 'whoa nelly!' Hahaha seriously, well written. You left a trail of puzzle pieces, and I'm glad I started putting the puzzle together. This was really fun to read. It was like a murder mystery you know. Like that kind of build up with clue after clue until you get that one clue that makes everything you've gathered make sense. Ugh, this I just be rambling now. Just know that this was a fantastic story. Well written and a joy to read. Thanks for sharing!

Chapter 1: Well, take my heart and break it, will you. This wasn't what I signed up for!

OTL

Well. That ending was highly unexpected, but, looking back, there were so many hints and signs, the, in my opinion, most noticeably being the whole thing about Jongdae's parents not seeing Luhan. Really, when I think about it, it's... so sad. The mother mentioned to Junmyeon that Jongdae had locked himself up alone in the room, but Jongdae... Aw. And, also in retrospect, the thing with the mental illnesses... Why did you have to do this?

The thing with the admirer and messages and presents were so sweet and I knew they were from Junmyeon, so the revelation made me so sad - but nothing compared to when Jongdae broke down when he realised Luhan wasn't real, likewise with Junmyeon's second brother and the puppy. Also when Junmyeon realised that something was very wrong with his friend. Sob.

Anyway, I'm happy about the (somewhat) happy ending. They are together in the end and Junmyeon can help Jongdae. That's good. A little less heart-breaking than other possible endings.

So, truly a masterpiece this time around. Kudos to you! ... Or upvotes. If I could, I'd give you a handful of upvotes, but, alas, I can't, so this will have to suffice.

Great work!

Chapter 1: Owah I thought Luhan is a real person.. poor Jongdae ;_;..
Lucky Joonmyeon was there for him :"

Chapter 1: Ouch! that was... ouch! I mean, Jongdae is so into his own little world it hurts. and Joonmyun baby trying to make him understand the whole thing and.. ouch!
It was so beautiful though! :o The way he fights against his own mind at the end. Wow!
Congrats!