Oblivious

Description

Why didn't he notices how much I want his attention? Is my way too oblivious? What do I do now?

 

I never good in description. It's a one-shot btw. I don't really think it really need description =)

Foreword

I write this for a competition actually but then my friend who I seek help forgot to send it. So I decided to put it in here. Hope you guys enjoy =) Leave a comment so I can write better for you guys next time. Thank you. Sarang you!

 

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ALL PICTURES AREN'T MINE. CREDIT TO THE OWNERS. THANK YOU.

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seiyntheea
#1
Chapter 1: "you moved her head"
"you stood up when she realized"

i thought there's two girls in this story. the story is great, I like it. but u can make other people confused with it :))
maybe giving her a name wouldn't hurt
seiyntheea
#2
Chapter 1: "you moved her head"
"you stood up when she realized"

i thought there's two girls in this story. the story is great, I like it. but u can make other people confused with it :))
maybe giving her a name wouldn't hurt
YongNa #3
Chapter 1: What the--- kyaaaaa, what am i doing, reading this story? Omaigod, 동생아, 짱이다!

Psstt, i'm fast in finding this, right? I'm awesome and i know it. Haha XD