Who is the real enemy?

Description

Just a little Taekai one shot. I hope you like it ^o^

Foreword

"Why did you betray me? I loved you. So much. I loved you to death. You're the worst"

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Ov3rdos3
#1
Chapter 1: It's a good story. But if you want an advice, you should just separate all your lines. Like, you write 6 lines and then you jump lines, 6 lines again etc etc. It'll be better for the reader. :3