Act of courage

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Luhan was a very shy guy who was scared to talk to anybody in his school. Jessica is the popular-innocent looking girl, who has a beautiful personality.Kris is a mean cold person, who's obsessed with Jessica and torments her everyday of her life. What happens when luhan decides to do something that changes his life for good. Blood will be lost, memories will be erased and lives will be put in grave danger.

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CrimsonFox #1
Chapter 5: It's not a bad story, but it started getting random when you said, "It was Luhan!!!! And his whole EXO Gang! Along with B.A.P and Shinee!! They where all over the sky and on the ground looking like bosses wearing sunglasses." The whole Exo Gang was random, because you never mentioned them till now along with B.A.P. and SHINee. If you had it where they had met at school, or helped save Jessica with Luhan, then that would flow more with the story. It also just seemed sudden and random with all the action at the end of this chapter (AoC ch5 Worlds Collide).
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