Stolen by the Moon

Description

Yifan is undead, Yixing is immortal. They have forever and never.

Foreword

"It was too long ago since the vampire and the angel began meeting, stealing away tender kisses under the moon. It was amazing how long they have been able to do it, a secret hidden in the shadows. A love like this- it was unnatural and it was intoxicating."

 

"They had forever, but their moments were measured in heartbeats and Yifan could only count the ticks of the second hand."

 

 

Written for the (SOLSTICE) Writing Contest (click picture)

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Prompts used:

#36. I was the moon of your life. You were my sun and stars. But just like the sun and moon, we were never meant to share the same sky.

#60. Exo M: Moonlight

 

 

 

Thanks for the review by HaibaraShery at ヵ゛ラク シ Ⓖ ⓐ Ⓛ ⓐ ⓧ ⓨ Review Shop

And by boogerbrain95  at Diaphanous Reviews and Tips

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And by xoxoexo at EXO-L(OVE) Review Shop

 

 

p.s. comments contain some spoilers, so read at your own risk, but please comment too! ^_^

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RedLuck #1
Chapter 5: It's my first time reading KrAy fanfics like this (fantasy au) and this exceeds much of my expectations. I am too happy to read this masterpiece. The story is really saddening and depressing and I love the way you tell the story in a different sequence of happenings. Honestly, I was happy when I saw the epilogue before I started the story coz I'm hoping for some reincarnated relationship of the two or whatever that can make them be finally together at the end if ever it will have a sad ending. The explanation really helped tbh Suho could really be an sometimes (in some stories mind you). Thank you for making this story! More power to you!
kroongho #2
Chapter 5: ooh i rly liked this fic, thanks for writing it!
LuhansOrange #3
Chapter 4: author, i just wanted to say you did an amazing job. this was really beautiful and even though it was short it made me emotional tbh ;~;
skyerebel #4
Chapter 4: I would've loved if this was actually abit longer, because the idea is precious. Reading it made me want to know more about the lives, the worlds these two separated souls live in. I wanted to know more, but the language you used was beautiful, abit confusing at times, but nevertheless took my breath away. Hope there's more to come. ^^
Marshmallow_Princess #5
Chapter 4: Wow this was beautiful; tragic, yet still beautiful. Haha I am thankful I trusted you and read this instead of running away after peaking at the comments. You know, this might've been even more lovely if it had been longer. But at the same time I like this length, it gives enough freedom for the reader to think themselves. Ah this fanfic makes me think indeed, it's one of those beautifully written ones which I should love but feel too heartbroken after reading it to love. Haha this is like one of those stories that are so damn good but so sad and you kinda don't ever want to read again but you keep remembering how good it was so you come crawling back with a box of tissues ready to sob when the sadness kicks in XD
IridescentSky #6
Chapter 4: Oh wow +___+ what began as (or so I thought) a haunting forbidden romance quickly spiralled into despair for them both :| I love the line in your foreword "They have forever and never." I truly summed up their relationship in just those five words. I loved it, I loved how it wasn't a happy ending because it didn't end in the clichéd "love will conquer all" theme everyone goes for.

So beautiful...
myotterprince #7
Chapter 4: Wow...T^T
So lay died because he was in love with a vampire and the guardian found out ?
niangniang #8
Chapter 4: wow just wow this was so beautiful my fanxing feels //sobs/ the plot, the diction, the style, kris and lay ;D everything was just so amazing im still too stunned by the ending to put words together properly asdfghjkl

one thing though, throughout the story, the are italicized words - are they lyrics? o:
HaibaraShery #9
Chapter 4: ugh my heart </3
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