Chapter 2: I have all the feels right now! This was a beautifully written story, and I liked how you used the beats per minute. But it just got so sad at the end that I teared up. Even though I knew it wasn't going to have a happy ending, a part of me still hoped Hakyeon and Hongbin would have more time.
Chapter 2: Oh my god! How could -- But why -- This is just-- I knew it wasn't going to end happily but I didn't expect it to break my heart! This story is beautiful and cute but extremely heart-wrenching! Oh gosh! I love how Hakyeon cared so much for Hongbin and even went as far as to visit him despite his other priorities. And the progression of their relationship was shown so nicely and wasn't hurried. But, ugh, reading this hurt a lot! I also love the way you write and how you presented the whole thing and making use of the beats per minute. Gosh, this is just amazing, but sad. Excuse me while I recover from all the emotions.
Chapter 1: it's a really good story. I can't wait to see what will happen next. There're not many NBin stories here so i'm happy you wrote one. A good one even :)
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