Chapter 3: AHHHHHH IM CRYING I NEVER CRY ;u; ahhh i love confessions so much just tkctdskogn they're so nerve wracking and anxiety inducing to the point where you can't take it but then you find out they've felt the same and you just want to scream and kiss their face and never let go and just AHHHHH CONFESSIONS ARE SO CUTE!!!!((when they work out))
Chapter 3: Awwwwww. I melted! This was so utterly cute and sweet. I really enjoyed it and I am very grateful that you chose to write another small chapter to this story! I really love the confession part. I love how shy both Yongguk and Junhong were and how cute as well. Oh. This was so awesome! The ending was just perfect.
Chapter 3: Excuse me while I scream and die and sob and squeal because I WAS NOT EXPECTING THIS and then an ending and beautiful and wonderful and amazing and I think I'm starting to run out of adjectives and T.T this was wonderful.
Chapter 3: This was super adorable. I was curious how you were going to make them work cause I feel like it's a lot easier to write in their head space then to make actual dialogue at least for me, but their conversation flowed very naturally. Nervous Yongguk is so cute, and I liked how Zelo just decided to spill the beans.
A DaeJae would be cute too. I can see Youngjae now "Daehyun is an idiot, who should be thankful for his voice cause his only other talent is eating. But I guess that makes me an idiot too, since I'm the fool who fell in love with him." I'm currently working on a daejae for the first time too and they aren't being very nice to me. :( But perhaps you'll have better luck. ^^
Anyway thanks for this last chapter, I really enjoyed it. ♡
Chapter 2: I really enjoyed reading these two small chapters. Each one was written so beautiful in its own way. I liked that both of them looked at each other. Now if only they could see that they both are looking at each other!
Chapter 2: ahhhhh i dont want to force you to do anything but seeing them get together would be really cute ( / . \ ) and i kind of like absolutehominy's idea with the lyrics yayayayayayyaayyaya
ok sorry im going
Chapter 2: Ooo I really like this. I love detailed and poetic stories like this, like I want to roll around in the words. ^^! Sorry I'm weird, but I know how you feel. There's something different about writing from this poetic place inside your characters head. When I wrote my banglo Wild Geese I felt like that too and wondered if I was being too over dramatic, but you did awesome and honestly very refreshing from the usual banglo. I'd love to see you continue to write this and actually have them get together. ♡♡♡ It could be like "what we see when our eyes finally meet" ^^! I'm sure you'd think of something better. Anyway thanks so much for sharing. ^^ I hope to read more banglo from you in the future.
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