You have a boy friend who is kind of suspicious. He says that he is a business man but there is something else to it. However, you are not sure what that is. What could it be?
Hi..i'm back..finished re-reading your story..wanna give a suggestion..it's confusing because instead of using their name.. you used 'I' in your story..so it's kinda like POV type of story..so, can you please, next ti,e. metion whose POV it was..lie if it's nichkhun..you can put 'Nichkhun POV"...something like that. so that we readers wont be too confused, searching for whose part in the story..^^..hwaiting..
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