Chapter 1: this is nicely written... and honestly i feel... is like what all the idols do despite the cameras on and off and however many years you've been in it. it's kinda sad and i really wish it wasn't so, but who knows... it may not even be for some of them. anyways good job. =]
Chapter 1: Great story, I really like how you perceive idol life to be and how you used Jin since he sometimes seems like he has a mask on. Keep up the good work =D
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