A Piece of Paper

Description

A drabble in a letter format, and readers can imagine which couple/characters they would like to imagine for this simple drabble. For me I'd imagine OTP, though the contents didn't mention any references to real life situations.

Prompt: The Real Reason We Broke Up by Younha (우리가 헤어진 진짜 이유 - Younha) -heard the song for the first time after Dara played it on Yoo Inna's Volume Up today 5/28. Almost fell into a depression spell again if not for TM who pulled me out lol. Beautiful but painful song.

 

Foreword


"They say when you're about to die, flashes of your life passes by your eyes.

 

I guess the same happens when love is about to die. Flashes of the memories you both shared of what you had pass by your eyes.

 

I wonder if you experienced the same thing too, that fateful afternoon."


 

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OhItsYing
#1
Chapter 1: TT.TT
Them feels
Strawberiimiyuki
#2
Chapter 1: Well, I'm a er for sad stories but I love happiness in the story as much as I want to feel how vulnerable and transparent the characters are in one so... I made up an ending in my mind, full of love, happiness, and contentment. :)
gwenniep
#3
Chapter 1: awww...sad, but i can understand that feeling. and i love younha's song.
PamelaGumamela #4
Chapter 1: OMG!!!! Mixed emotions!!! Indeed this is a good story coz of the nice sho ice of Dara in Volume Up. While I was reading this, I'm listening to Younha's song. I'm torturing myself. WAHAAHA. Anyway, as expected, you did it again. Ugh. How do you that angst feels? AIGOO. Soo JJANG!!! WAAAH. I really like this sad and yet longing DARA!!! You can really feel her pain throughout the story I must say it's very effective to me. I wanna trash something after I read this but I can't that's too much. Wahaha. Anyway, DAEBAK, authornim!!!!
nyongdalien
#5
Chapter 1: It's so painful but I love it. I can feel longing, emptiness, regret from this story. You're great authornim :)
DaragonButterfly #6
Chapter 1: sad....like it
Lilyyuu
#7
Chapter 1: First, that song is so beautiful omf im so happy you linked it otherwise i would have never heard it or fell in love with it, so thank you! <3

Second, ohmygosh this is so sad, i can feel the pain the person is feeling and it hurtsss ;; i really love how you wrote this and the way you wrote this, it feels like im in the person's mind - this honestly seems like something someone in that situation would write, it just feels so reaaal ;~; thanks for writing this, it was a really nice, albeit heartbreaking, read <33
4lifeMister #8
Chapter 1: damn. This hurts... haha I really liked this, both beautiful and simple. Great work ^_^ even if right now I feel a hole now burned into my heart </3 hahaha