Not a Perfection

Description

'You can't feel anything in death'

Foreword

You, Jung Mina is a 21 years old girl or rather a woman who has a life that is nothing near perfection.

The moment when you finally  found a perfection that you never imagine you will have, you couldn't be more happier. 

You simply called the person a perfection because to you, he's the only perfection you have ever seen.

But happiness doesn't last long,especially when that happiness involves your life.

 

The perfection lied to you every single day and you never notice that, not at all.

The truth he told you was nothing compared to the amount of pain when he showered you with his lies,

The perfection is the only person you will ever pour your loves to.

But he's gone, leaving you forever.

 

You have no one anymore in your life.

Abandoned by your own so-called-parents,

Left by your own perfection,

Friendless fatherless motherless 

named it all, you have it.

 

Your life was basically nothing.

So why bother living when you can end everything in no more than a second?

"Where's the nearest pier?," you asked yourself as you moaned in pain, letting the red thick liquid trickled down to the floor.

 

 

'The truth might hurt for a little while but a lie hurts forever' 

 

 

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Sorry for the grammar mistakes since English isn't my first languange.

And this is for a writing contest I'm entering,

here's the link :  http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/741580/you-are-a-star-one-shot-writing-contest-accepting-entries-beast-contest-oneshot-you-writingcontest-exo-bap

 

exoangst
it won 'best twist' in the writing contest i entered wtaf i never expected it

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swe3t_giRL
#1
Chapter 1: Wtf, HOW COULD YOU DO THIS BAEK !! Whyyyyyy
itzmefrs
#2
Chapter 1: omg ; - ; can you do the sequel?
sunggyuu
#3
Chapter 1: WTF BAEKHYUN YOU
Channievirus #4
Chapter 1: Ayeee sequel please~~ the story is too good to end. I want to know how will baek feel after knowing that she committed suicide. He should feel AWFUL N REGRETFUL.
Kimchiebae
#5
Chapter 1: Bad bad B! Good story! I just hope its longer, hehe but me likey!
damnitlrh #6
Chapter 1: WHAT THE ACTUAL MAN I HATE YOU SO MUCH I WAS LIKE 'OMG HES SO SWEET I CREY KYAKYAKYA' TO ' OMG YOU IHYSM GO DIE' ITS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN I MEAN EVEN DILOH PUN SAID LIKE THAT MY GOD WHY YOURE SO GOOD AT THIS CRIES
damnitlrh #7
holy
your grammar doe !
wish you the best,